Intriguing. Not the typical pairing in the SSO fandom but the Selene/Endymion analogy works the way you've done it for these two. Especially when you consider on of the last images in the anime of Esperanza in the heart of the flowers that Licorice loved so much.

Good flow in the story portions of fic although there wasn't a lot of dialogue the characters still felt the same.

Enjoyed the story and look forward to more.