write another!

YAY! You finally had time to start a fic! AWESOME! I think you had me read the Rough draft of this before and I have to say other than a few grammar mistakes it was great! I hope you have time to update it soon!

Kina

Oh, this looks really promising! I can't wait for the next installment... Winry, a State Alchemist? Now that is an interesting plot device. Aside from very few and really inconsequential mistakes (and I'm sure I have a few in my review as well, so don't worry) in the terms of grammer and spelling (and they are easily overlooked and automatically corrected by our wonderful brains) it is VERY well written. In my opinion at least.