Oh my God i love this. I was hoping someone would this episode from the Doctor's POV. I love that he owns his confusion, and that the pockets on his coat are bigger on the inside. That was brilliant.

"Four things... and a lizard" That's got to be one of the best lines in New Who. Just the way he says it :-) I would encourage you to try to write the whole of Blink from the Doctor's piont of view. Looking from his perspective, it's a very confusing adventure and it would make a very interesting story. But if you don't have time I totally understand. Just know that if you wrote it, I would read it.