hm. another great story. the ending does seem a little abrupt though... for such awesome buildup it all ended about five hundred words after cloud got turned D:

This is great work, and you came up with a very original concept for this. When I saw the mention of vampires, I though 'uh-oh' there's no way this can work... but it does! You are an excellent writer and I really enjoy your style, your characterizations are superb and your descriptions very effective at setting the tone and scene.

Fantabulous story.
Great plot LOVE it! More to come?! If so UPDATE SOON!

Beautiful story. Your descriptions of the vampire is commonplace to the other descriptions of novels and such, although the the fact they can exist in sunlight adds originality. I love it. This story does not need a sequel for it is perfect as is.

And your right. Forever is devastating when you are alone. I learned that the hard way...

My, what a cute fic about vampires.
Love it =^.^=
I'm really satisfied with the personality of Aerith!

How you manage the romance so well, you must brush your teeth lots to avoid getting the cavities this sort of stuff must cause. Mebbe it is the bits-o-angst you add for teeth stregthening? ^_~

Now this one i love too, well done again ^_^ i cant use this for any inspiration to my epic but i love reading a good fic nonetheless, (Claps twice) Well done Miss Alantie Mistaniu (Claps twice more) Well done!

hope you make more fanfics i'll be wating to read them (Bows and takes flight)

Aww, the ending was really sweet! And the whole concept was really interesting as well. Will there be a sequel? ^__^ Much love to ya!

AH! I LOVED IT! YOUR a genius!! give yourself a pat on the back, you deserved it. Gosh Im still in shock about this... lol

Hai.
Nice story `hombre. Or whatever.
It was hot.
YOu've got mad skillz.

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OMG!
I loved it!! You just made me sad when you ended it XD
So cute~ vampire love. nice move with these two XD

*favs it*