Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: So Close To Home - Reviews: Page 1 of 12

101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 18,
abusei can understand your pov that you feel this ending isnt good enough, but i like it, it seems to wrap things up, i would have liked to see more of warrick... i cant think of anything more to say...

loved it, ciao 4 now
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 17,
abuseit's liek everyone has sort of come to terms with things...

what about warrick and catherine?

i love that greg can touch people again...

heres my little thing though, and hear me out, its not a bad thing

but this guys MO changed a little, witht he first three victims there was an item involved with their work, and with sara, a knife? and john, a candle...?

maybe it was the escalation of the case, and things got a little chaotic.

off to read the next chapter wb
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 16,
abuseeek, it's sara...

and jim should know better

you know for a moment there you had me considering i had been 100% wrong and riza was at risk
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 15,
abusei knew it! yay, well not so yay as people are at risk, maybe roger has them both... part of me wants him to go after grissom and another part of me wants him to go after sara, i can see two different, well3 different scenarios...

im going to leave it at that
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 14,
abuseit's roger!

i didnt liek how he actively seeked out greg... and i loved how greg went to nick to talk about his suspicions!
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 13,
abuseno now there is an invisible wall between them!

and yet nick seems to understand this, all will be fixed, all will be good!

i cant wait for more, and i will finish reading this chapter.

now that greg is almost on his own (what with the cops outside, but not inside - to an extent - ) i think more action is going to happen.
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 12,
abusei would be so annoyed if greg hung up on me like that! he should know better

i liked how he reacted when he realised nick was on his way. and the sticky note on the head! i also love how greg was frozen much like the head in his freezer

greg is going to walk into trouble isnt he, and nick wont get there on time, or maybe he will, and he will save the day, and greg will opne up to him, or is that wishful thinking?

keep your head on? that is sucha bad pun!

lost my head? he is getting worse!

eek nick was cold to greg... no

im surprised greg didnt react badly to nick wanting to be alone with him, and to talk...

i could sense that greg was scared of nick and you just confirmed it!

he opened up! i love this scene, i love how greg used nicks own experienes to sum up his own
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 11,
abuseright ive just got to riza talking about south africa, and i have to say this as im worried, is john dead? as in dead and is in or was in a similar situation to greg was, and is it the same person, and are they getting at john as he helps greg, has the person become obsessed with greg, like a stalker, he did have that woman use gregs name in the 911 call. okay i'll stop rambling and read on, back in a bit...

woah he is dead, that was so cruel she thought it was all romantic. the killer is sick, he set it up so that she thought she was in for a romantic evening, and made it look like he was just lying there. she might be now regreting getting so attached to greg

eek she forgot english!

woah there is a message above the bed...!

and she is still sympathising with greg - well i would - but still, it seems so irrational given her present predicament. i would be overcome. poor greg...

well then again she did seem a little annoyed... and given all thats happened who wouldnt be, it was like i could hear annoyence in her voice - but thats crazy isnt it? -

sara is kind fo jealous!

im just wondering how greg will feel when he finds out. he will feel violated again, and like he is under attack, he will think it is his own fault...

i think i know why this guy is obsessed with greg - mind you who wouldnt be? - greg is a cop, he was involved in the case, and he is the only surviving victim, maybe greg is like unfinished buiness, or he relates to him...

actually come to think of it, what could represent johns work - yeah i know i shouldnt really think that, but hey...

oh a candle... not as bad as a gun though - damn ive been numbed by this fic! ew -

eek her phone has rung, i wonder who it is, is it the killer? btw i wonder when greg will open up to nick, mind you will he be able to now that this has happened, no wait the phone call might be about greg, right? the killer has him.

i hope that dna works out, and matches harolds...

okay i will stop speculating and click that button that leads me to the next chapter... wb
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 10,
abusedamn i accidently deleted my last review

i was just syaing (before i deleted it) that i like ms evans and i thought that greg might feel a little violated as she had talked about to her husband.

i loved that greg tried to open up a bit. it was all going so well till they ran out of evidence and the family dynamic had been shattered, however i love that nick hasnt even come close to guessing what happened
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 9,
abuserumours and speculation, eh?

i love the fact that grissom is at a loss for words as to what to say to greg, and i figure that deep down the whole team have either thought about what happened to greg and have either stumbled upon the truth and maybe overlooked it and tryed to not believe it.

there is more that i want to say, but im a bit like grissom at the moment, as when i realised the next chapter was a click away i got a little distracted
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 8,
abuseher opinion shouldnt need to skyrocket, i love greg no matter what, and in some fics thats difficult to do, but there is good in everyone although sometimes you have to look harder than usual.

anyway, nice chapter, and warrick is right, i wonder if nick has been thinking the same things...
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 7,
abusewoah, now that was an interesting revelation about the broom etc.

i have gtg now so, if possible could you please pm me and remind me of this fic?

mind you i might be able to squeeze in the next chapter before i go, please dont be a cliffie!
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 6,
abusepoor greg, i hate seeing him feeling isolated, nick shouldnt have reacted that way, and yet i understand how.

i was upset at how greg reacted to brass and sara.

aw, anyway off to click away to the next chapter
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 5,
abusenow that is a scary cliffie... lucky for me the next chapter is just a button click away for me. woah

first off, i liked how you described greg once he was discharged from the hospital. and also that brass kind of guessed, and is also all knowing like grissom
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 4,
abusetypical nick...

greg reacted quite well i think, the whole team are bound to find out soon enought though
Return to Top