 mzinke 2009-06-04 . chapter 4Your Story is wonderful. I hope you continue it. |
 JillieJo 2009-05-14 . chapter 1Oh I love your story!! I just found it today. I hope continue with this story. Your writing is amazing and your story is tight. Please don't give up on it, your readers are dying to know what will because of Scarlett and Rhett.
Thank you for sharing your talented writing with us readers. |
 AngelLuva 2009-04-23 . chapter 4i hope u come back and write a few more chapters.. this is a great story.. :-) |
 BlaqueCat13 2008-11-08 . chapter 4I see that it has been almost a year since you have updated this story, hopefully you are busy writing another chapter. I see you are using characters from Scarlett(that awful book). I hope you make Lord Fenton likable, I would like to see Scarlett torn between him & Rhett, maybe even go about it in the fact that Rhett actually loses her to Fenton and tries to let her be happy. Of course, that is up to you since you are the author and I am just a reader. Also, please have someone proofread for you, I see some mistakes in grammar and sentence structure."Cat and Luke was laughing freely, splashing water to each other faces..." Should be "were" and "into each others faces..." Just a few of these type of mistakes, that's all. |
 EugeniaVictoria 2008-02-28 . chapter 4this story is great... |
 namedafteru 2008-02-24 . chapter 4Great read. You are creating a very compelling love quadrangle here. I can't wait to read more! |
 Aroon1190 2008-01-20 . chapter 4That was a great chapter! i cant wait to find out what the proposal is but i have feeling its going to be the "supported" mistress question. or maybe not. plz hurry and update the suspense is killin me. |
 Dracoginnylover24 2008-01-16 . chapter 4Well, now I just want to know what happens next! Can't wait to read more, Good Luck! :D |
 Annie3 2008-01-06 . chapter 4I really enjoyed reading this chapter, particularly the tea party scene with Luke and Cat. Please update soon, I'm waiting breathlessly to find out about this proposal... for some reason I don't think it's marriage... Great work |
 Laura Butler 2007-12-27 . chapter 4Wow great chapter!
I know that Scarlett is hard to write (I only can write Scarlett's pov when I'm upset .. I don't know why but Rhett's pov are a little easier to write)
I love to wee Luke more human I truly hate Luke in the book He is so ... cad.
I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
 Tuduvant 2007-12-11 . chapter 4Come on! What are you whining? It was great. =) And I hope Rhett finds out soon and get REALLY-REALLY jealous. xD
And also, I'm flattered. :D "Thanks for last chapter" and I was the first one in line.
I tried to find your FictionPress story the other day, but I didn't have any luck, so now I'm gonna visit your profile and reach fictionpress and that also means, that I will be stuck here all night and that I won't have time to study for my geography test. But who cares anyway?
Eva |
 the yellow flower 2007-12-10 . chapter 4good chapter. enjoyed reading it. yeah, scarlett is harder to write... i personally don't think she would admit she was scared because she didn't admit it either to rhett when atlanta was being burned. but the love story is cute. i'll be awaiting he next chapter! |
 LittleOriginalOne 2007-12-10 . chapter 4Oh just please don't let him as her to be his mistress. She deserves so much better than that!
Excellent chapter tho, as always. |
 Tohru12 2007-12-10 . chapter 4This chapter was very good. It was interesting to see how Scarlett's relationship with Fenton developed. My only hope is that he dies in the Boyne, hahaha. Anyways great job so far.
Update soon!
-Tohru12 ^_^ |
 missysammy 2007-12-10 . chapter 4I do think she is a little out of character. I dont think she would be as willing to get a horse again after all the accidents and i dont think she would be as willing to play around in the water with her daughter after nearly drowning. But hey it is fanfiction and you can write them anyway you wish!
I am enjoying it though. I must say i hate Fenton and i cant wait for Rhett to come for Scarlett and put him in his place!! |