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| Jessi Tsuki 2008-07-17 ch 1,  | abuseAww that's kind of sad. ;.; |
| Ining-Batong 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abuse"Those are the reasons that That Bastard and Colonel Bastard deserve to be called bastards. They were never the fathers I wanted them to be. And I hate the fact that I still care about both of them. …Bastards." hahaha okay thats funny |
| kim carol 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseOuch. That hurts and is painful. May be short but very powerful and good. |
| Shikuki 2007-12-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseyou know that's probably something Ed really thinks about, cept in the show he likes mustang |
| Ruingaraf 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abuseAww, Roy does care about the poor boy like a son, though. I love how you wrote Ed's voice. Brilliant. XD |
| TenshiElric 2007-09-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseGASP! *slaps ed's daddy (cant spell his name! LOLS XD)* *slps roy* |
| E.Mahiru 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseYeahh! We should SO have a bastard-slapping contest! |
| Anti-Logic 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abuseHiya! I'm liking your one-shots. Just one thing I'd thought I'd point out: "He'd make fun of me for the rest of my mind." The phrase is "life," isn't it? I know you're Finnish, and I think it's just awesome that you can write in English as well as you can. Keep it up! |
| Harryswoman 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abusethis was good! |
| Inachis 2007-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abuse...you know, that's a very clever idea actually. And the tones very Ed to my "ear" too. :) Thanks for sharing! |
| edo little kid 2007-09-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI LOVED IT! |
| TuffChick 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuseAGH! I SERIOUSLY FELT BAD! POR EDDY! sigh im such a sap for stories like these! I LOVED IT! |
| jenelric 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this! Well done! ^^ |
| nao. xx 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuseAw, that's so cute! I love Edward's relation with ust about anyone, especially father figures and such. Very in-character, nice, short, and sort of funny. I liked it. |
| Cold-Foxx 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuseXD I enjoyed it, but it made me laugh. Good job! |