IT WOULD BE SOO FUNNY IF NARUTO MARRIeD NEJI INSTEAD OF HINATA BECAUSE U DIDN'T REALLY GIVE US A NAME! HAHAHAHAHAHA!

I must say, I really liked this one. You've pegged all the things that bother me about Sakura in this fic, but you didn't do it in a way that bashes her. Seeing her through Naruto's always-forgiving eyes is wonderful. And I love the white-eyed son, yay!

I like how it turned out. Your characters have a lot of pathos.

First: "Which, I might add, is the entire point of the character categories. Thank you, and have a nice day." - way to put your foot up a reviewers ass:D

Second: Double woot.

I like how even after everything has changed, his point of view and ritual hasn't.Candy, gift, grin.

It was an interesting take on how things would end up. I don't personally see Sakura as the kind of person to leave the village and travel. But it fit, so that doesn't matter.

I'm not fond of the pairings but I like how it's vague and runs through his life. Good job.

i liked that everything was sort of distantly described, kinda not there, or something, and that gave this story a nostalgic feeling, and although i'm not sure why, i really like how you mentioned the other characters. kudos. :]

Crypic is good - not at all confusing to me, as stated in your notes, but /good/.

I love how this one can be interpreted as a NaruSaku but really wasn't meant as one. A few of my more recent pieces have turned out that way, because there wasn't really an established pairing and the details weren't all that specific.

And I'm probably just rambling at you now, but I cannot think of a single complex thing to describe the fluidity of this story.

I'll start with 'Wow' and leave it at that. :]

Beautiful. No more words needed

I liked it. But you shouldn't have made Sakura become like Tsunade. It's anticlimactic unless you want to write a sequel.

That's so sad! Even though it's not a NaruSaku, it was still very nice. Great job!

Mou, mesa liked it. O

Though I pray you're implying SasuIno. Cause if it's SasuTema I'm disowning you. xD

Sakura is kinda a fool xD but the story was great:) lol and Naruto ends up with Hinata or something in the end?:( oh well xD

*demands the story to go to my favs*

Coming from someone who's a far bigger SasuNaru fan than anything else, I can't help but feel Sakura was too OOC in this fic for it to be completely enjoyable.

Don't get me wrong. It was beautifully written and all, but I simply cannot see Sakura abandoning her teammates without a word like that. She simply loves them both too much. Also, I think Sakura was portrayed as being too cold towards Naruto. She may not be interested in him romantically, but she still cares about him a great deal.

Sorry, but this is not even close to being NaruSaku. Implied(focus on Naruto and Sakura, nobody else!) not even close to that because you already made the pair with what you wrote which is NaruHina(pairing fans will point this out)which is by far pretty blantant when people(NaruSaku or any other fans)look at it.

First, Naruto marries Hinata, that does not implies NaruSaku. If the character are not OOC, then why is Naruto even married to Hinata? Also, Sakura(she is like Naruto when it comes to the habits of their sensei) never or will pickup her sensei's habit of travel, her Inner-Sakura would not allow it nor would Naruto.

Next, since this is even not implied, oneside or NaruSaku. Change the category filter from Nartuo & Sakura. Pairings fans(or any other) are very teritorial for what is placed in the category filter and what they expected. Doesn't matter if Naruto and Sakura are mentioned in the story, pairing fans look at the pairings which in this case not even NaruSaku. So yeah, you will be PMed with nasty messages, flamed or whatnot.

Later.

so its naruhina sasuino right