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Lilspring 6/3/09 . chapter 8
brilliant story ill put this as my fav story
Luckk too lazy to log in 11/21/06 . chapter 8
I really need to remeber to reveiw people. I read this a while ago but never reveiwed...

Anywhoo, I love this story. The edning was perfect even though I really want to read more but that may ruin the story. This is a very nice story.
SeekJustice 1/21/06 . chapter 8
Perfect story! Treize was Dorthy were horrible. I think my favorite part was when you introduced Heero and Duo's reaction to it. Everything that happened in this fic had something to go the the bigger plot.

Favorites! _

Two-Bit
anonymousnight 12/30/05 . chapter 8
Wow! I really did like that, very creative, I would've never thought of a storyline like that. Plus, there wasn't an over-doing of sap and/or tears like in other fics. I also like the fact that you didn't make Quatre the one who was always emotional and everything, but you made all the other characters have a sensitive side as well. Very nice balance.

As for improvement... hm... maybe make an Eplilogue? So that we know what happens to them? Or maybe not haha cause this way we just kind of formulate our own endings... cliffhanger-ish.. I dunno, tis your fic and it is very good the way it is! But yeah I do think you could extend this and make more parts... that could definitely work... but at the same time it was a very nice ending.

I loved it. .

anonymous;night;
Sutoomu 9/4/05 . chapter 8
This was so cute and sad and awesome I loved it a lot. U're good.
Amarin Rose 3/11/05 . chapter 8
Hmm. Well, not a happy ending, but a hopeful one. :)
Amarin Rose 3/11/05 . chapter 3
So is it just brown hair? Or any color besides blond? And the blue eyes...most people think Duo has purple eyes, but they're actually blue, with a slight purple tint.

So...Relena and Dorothy wouldn't be slaves... Treize and Une, neither, most probably. What about Wufei?
Wan wingu no tenshi 12/27/04 . chapter 3
"He was going to stay so Heero could be free."

I really like this line. It's very sweet . Am hoping that the relationship will be too.

Trowa's loyalty to Duo is also something I like very much.

Well done.
Wan wingu no tenshi 12/27/04 . chapter 2
This is really interesting. Well written, a very good read .
Wan wingu no tenshi 12/27/04 . chapter 1
Lookin' good! I like the look of this ).
Vida the stoic 8/1/04 . chapter 8
Yea I am reviwe #126 or so...I rock! Love the story!
tati1 7/27/04 . chapter 8
Love it. Remarkably well-written, and the plotline is fab. I'm still sorta flinching over Milliardo's death, but *shrugs* you're the author.

Hoping for an update,

tati1
the weaver atropos 6/6/04 . chapter 8
This is an awesome story! I love it! The characterizations are great and the plot is unique. _ I LOVE IT! I don't think i have words to describe how cool this story is!
Havenhaven 3/6/04 . chapter 8
wow...that was an awesome story. i liked how Duo semed to be the stronger one in this fic than heero a defintaly new thing for most fics
Nikkler 1/24/04 . chapter 8
NNO! Don't tell me that is all! What happens to them now will there be a sequal? Will they survive ok? TELL ME! WA
it was a great story
huggles
nikkler
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