Hmm..you give good attn to detail, allowin a good bit of mental detail, espescially in the costumes..

The character personalities are amazingly like the animated originals..

Would love to see more from this genre/series
Great job ;)

I agree with you, that Toph is a great character who deserves better than she has received. I noticed that it has been some time since you updated this story. I would like to encourage you to continue it. You have a flair for telling a good tale, and I would hate to think that this story would end prematurely.

all I need you to do is to add more Kataang where are you from Tokka? You need
Kataang I am a Kataanger

P.S. check out Taya's powers

i love your story please update

I can't wait for the next chapter!

-Whoo! Long review!- Okay. I've taken long enough to review this. (And you update so infrequently... update, dang it!)

Chapter 1 - It's easy to see that you put a lot of thought into each character's outfit, and I like how you incorporated Katara's "I'll allow you..." thing, because we see her as a dominant character in the show, so it was a good portrayal of her character. I also liked where you said, "...He didn't hate the Fire Nation. He hated the war." That seems like a big statement, and I think it says a lot about Aang and establishing him as a character. This was a good start for you story.

Chapter 2 - I was especially pleased with this chapter, and for two reasons. 1st, the interaction between Aang and Katara at the beginning (and how he feels about having been so ready to give up his affection for her) was written so well and (I think) portrayed Aang's character wonderfully; I think he would feel that way about what happened, and I'm disappointed that the creators didn't put a reference to that in The Awakening. 2nd, I love your Toph, and I'm fond of Young Feng - she's an interesting character, and I'm glad you have her. The interactions between Toph and everyone else seem very believable. Oh, and the humor is good. Very, very good. :)

Chapter 3 - Sokka's suspicion at the beginning is a key part of his nature, so that was good. Azula's recollections help the reader to better understand her character and where she stands with both herself and the rest of her family. It was good that you showed that a character as cruel as Azula DOES have a heart and still cares, even after all that's happened. Also, when Aang commented on how the Fire Nation is hurting itself along with the other nations - that was a good, defining moment.

Overall, the chapters keep improving, and I'm looking forward to the next one. And ah! You cheater, watching the episodes beforehand! *points condescending finger at you* Well, at least you still watch them on T.V. That's all that counts. :)

awsome story i like the way you made azula seem human and the tokka was wonderful hurry up and right more soon i comand thee *claps hands twice*
-Megi

hm I write Tokka.. BUT YOU KNEW THAT XD.

Anyway I like this, Toph would kick Sokka's ass anyday and yes the Runaway sucked, but the one moment in 'Sokka's Master' made up for it in my opinion.

Here to waiting for another chapter :D

Awesome chapter!! i love the "public displays of affection."

I agree with you about the Runaway. Not good enough for me, but it was still good. SPARKY SPARKY BOOM MAN!

I read the author's notes... and yeah, I cheated too. My Zutarian soul literally screamed during "Nightmares and Daydreams". I freaked my friend out; it was kind of funny. Mostly not. Anyway, the story is good so far. Your take on Azula is very interesting. Keep up the excellent work!

I thought I was the only one who thought Mike & Brian were reading these stories. It's kinda creepily ironic. Anyway, good story.

Hey this is cool! And yes this is Maria not Kiera or Alex. I think that this story is nice so far but I have to go study so I will read the rest later.

~Ria~

GOOD STORY!!
Update soon!~ OH and update Spiral and SPin! I really wanna know wat happens next! but back to this story u r like a freaking frigmoppin excellent writer!

Hm…. Interesting start.. Srry it took so long to review… Senior yrs killing me! .. So nywys…. Very different from how we planned it, so I’m a bit curious to whn the story line we created is actually gonna start, but it’s a good beginning. The descriptions are nice, and the writing is very good. I like the whole thing wit the crazy lady teacher, hilarious! Can’t wait to read more! Keep writing!

Lovely lovely:) I SAW SEASON 3! FINALY IT'S WAS AWESOME!