 Smexy Kitten 2008-04-11 . chapter 26this was one heck of a freaking chapter! i loved reading every single word of it all. for a final chapter, it left me speechless. and the emotions conveyed were very well-written and constantly kept me thinking. i felt as if i were experiencing those very same emotions. when tsuzuki told hisoka that "Memories hurt the most," it really hit home sucked me into your story even more (mostly because there is so much truth to what was said, lol). i do have to say that i am kinda happy that things ended the way they did. it definitely makes way for an excellent sequel (loved the teaser, btw, lol).
anywho, i can honestly say that this story is one of the best DoD stories that i have read by far. i can see this fic going down as a classic here for the many more fans who will come to love your work as i have, lol... i'm sad to see it end, but i can't wait to read the sequel! |
 QueenOfHearts3 2008-04-10 . chapter 26first off, yay for sequels! particularly from one of your caliber :D now, to the review thingy heehee
~talk about opening with a bang O_O i felt like i WAS Hisoka, flashing through all those wretched memories, crawling through the debris despite blinding pain, all to reach Tsuzuki... so terrified that he was somehow dead or dying (i know, shinigamis dont die easily, particularly Tsu-chan, but still. caught up in the moment i guess) whoa. intense
~ the fear that he might be alone with the memories was heartwrenching, but thankfully it didnt last long :D huge sigh of relief there, i tell ya. and Tsu-chan's hand on his face, Hisoka not jerking away as he usually would (granted, hes exhausted, but i think hes figured out his own heart by now :D) is wicked sweet!
~ THE KISS! *happy spaz-dance* this deserves a note all its own hehe *high-pitched squealing* =^_^= seriously, THE most beautiful thing ive read in AGES! and believe me, i read it multiple times, just to savor the sheer joy of the image youve created in my vividly imaginative brain @`~~,~~`~~,~~ S W E E T N E S S ! ! ! ! @`~~,~~`~~,~~
~ waking up in the hospital is never fun XD i so hear Hisoka's frustration and whatnot here, having been there a few times myself. it sux big time, and you nailed it all- right down to the annoying feeling that some jerk thought itd be funny to glue your eyelids together while you "slept" hehe
~ just had to mention how extremely cute it is that Tsuzuki wont let him pull his hand back :D
~ the souls... theyre really gone, arent they? that was the price of the summons, as i recall :/ dangit, id hoped theyd be able to save everybody somehow. and heck, we're back to bitterness and self-recriminations again. youre makin ME cry too, ya know... *sniffles, blinking away tears* but, theyre slowly, slowly working toward some sense of peace, i think... i hope...
~ oh, that confession! *doesnt bother to stop the new waves of tears, clutching at her chest* be still, my heart. before i have a coronary, if you please T_T
~ ooh, Tsu-chan's perspective =^_^= nice! and i love the description of Tatsumi's office- its exactly like him, just as Tsuzuki notes lol and Tsu's "I didn't do it!" squeak was so CUTE! XD now im crying with laughter, perhaps as a remnant from a few minutes ago... heh
~ a new case, and involving Hisoka's REAL mother, eh? thats... not good? o_O() just love how protective Tsu-chan is of his partner tho, as always hehe and am i sensing a TasWat pairing in the future? =^_^= also, as dark and moody as the new case is likely to be, i adore your ending here. sort of like a candle in the dark... m *gazes off into space*
ps: im honored to be among those you mentioned #^_^# thank you! youve inspired me to get working on my own TsuSoka sequel heehee |