You did an excellent job. I loved the tone of the story and your characterizations. Thanks for sharing!

That was a great one-shot. It may seem long to you, but it was just about the length I like them. You can't call a fic epic until it break 100,0 words. No this was perfect.

Honestly, I never knew that taking off a mask could be so damn HOT! Geez. The whole story is great, but that one little section... I keep reading it and rereading it. Over and over. Hot damn! I love it. You're my new favorite person.

nice and unusual, i can't even say why... maybe because minato is so shy ;)

i really like this fic.

i think you are very talented.

please write more YonKa fics.

:)

This is love! LOVELOVELOVELOVE! You should write the lemon! It was so utterly lovely that I have no words!

It's wonderful story. Love the pairing of course.

Obito or Rin aren't brought up, but it doesn't flaw the story at all. Only thing that felt a bit weird, was Kakashi's overly dramatic, bloody entry, when returning from that -mission. I thought the little bastard would have gone angsty angstily lick those wounds up somewhere, more than drawing the attention of the whole village. But it's your Kakashi and I really liked the fic, thank you for writing it.

And I practically drooled about how Minato made the initiative. I hope you would write more than a one-shot with the pairing. I'd love to read it. Thank you.

AWW! So cute! love the ending!

*purrs happily* Fantastic. More people for the fandom! More fics for the archive. You're an excellent addition to our ranks, and your characterisation was quite something. I enjoyed the easy flow of your story, too!

Looking forward to more from you,

- Arashi-chan

woww! So Ms. B-mushi has converted you too, huh? Anyway, wonderfully written piece of work! I liked how Minato rambled like a blonde chicken and not like a hysterical mother. And then the mask-pulling was... nngh *waves arms dramatically* Hope to see more in the future.

Thank you, thank you, thank you - THANK YOU! This is *definitely* being favourited XD

I have literally five mins before I have to run for work, but saw you'd posted your lovely, lovely fic here, so simply had to review. I'll resist reiterating what I've already said on your lj (and will definitely write a proper review for it there, absolutely as soon as I have a mo'), but just want to say once more how very much I love this and how utterly fabulous you are.

Hontou ni arigatou ne!

bb x