O, I would love to see Brennan seeking out Booth in a green dress, talk about hot! Oh boy, I sense some angst! Well, you got DC traffic down, the roads at 8pm are horrid! Hehehe, Booth leaves his door unlocked. OMG, Can't Touch This? I would pay good money to see that. Oh the apron and cleaning lady comments. Booth in a fraternity, oh where my mind could take me if I let it... OMG, a gay fraternity? ahhaha. "I was a straight, hot-blooded guy, who didn't feel the slightest urge to hop around in a tutu." Oh what a hilarious line, gals, hilarious. But maybe booth should say "am" not "was"...
Okay, I don't blame Booth for being afraid of spiders or assuming Brennan would make it a pet but poor guy. "He's mocking me." I know the feeling, Boothy, I know the feeling. Oh, what a great exit line! Although I would have liked Brennan to say "not IN the dorm..." hehehe

He's manly enough for me... although a little feminine... that doesn't make sense, hold on...

Oh well. I'm sure he could prove it in OTHER ways...


Beagle

hysterical! this story completely made my day! booth can come clean my house any day!

OK that was just too cute...funny as hell...
You two are hilarious...I demand more funnies...
Thanks for that almost...this close...image of him showing her he's a real man...lol
I didn't fall for it...although t'wood have been great...
and the pink apron and yellow rubber gloves...
lmao here...

fab

As a fellow arachnophobe, I feel for Booth. Also, she does martial arts (a friend likes to spell that marital arts, but I think he is kidding me and really knows better), shoots a "big" gun and does other masculine things but nobody thinks she is butch. Besides, housecleaning is a dreadful chore so if Booth can make it more enjoyable, more power to him. (p.s. if you look under their aprons, you will find that gay guys are "men" too.)

You two together are just great! :-)

I am still laughing - first the SONG! OH MY GOD! At first I didn't know who MC Hammer was, but then, kind Niah send me a Youtube-Link and I went crazy! I think I will never ever get the imagine out of my mind with Booth dancing and singing to that song! Thanks for that!

And then again - the spider. You two totally mirrored my behaviour in describing Booth - laugh at me, if you want to, but when it comes to spiders I am not longer 23, I am a hysterical 14 year old girl, screaming at the top of my lungs!

Great story and a great co-work between you two. And this has only been created by your imaginations and via I-Net ... I wonder what we can expect after you two have actually met each other in person! :-)

I am so thrilled! :-)

Lots of hugs,

Kat

i really hope that there is a second chapter to this..it just needs a lil something but other than that it's awesome!

This was cute! I could totally see bad ** Booth afraid of spiders. Spiders I don't like them either! This was a cute story though that was great having Booth be a little housecleaner. Great job you two! Another fabulous production!

Jemb and Niah:

Another great team writing effort! You two have such a similar style that you can't tell who's written what, and that's quite a feat. Well done!

The way you described Brennan and how frazzled she is at the beginning of the story was great. Who hasn't had a day like that, where everything just piles one thing on top of the next until, as you put it, you would be in the mood for some 'serious snapping'? Booth would have been in some serious trouble.

Now, the fantastic cure all for that would be the sight that you described -- Booth in a pink apron with a feather duster. What a hilarious mental picture that makes! Her reaction, standing there, staring unblinkingly at him, is perfect. I can exactly picture it.

Booth's explanation for the frat shirt and then his challenging her to prove his manliness was perfectly placed to make the discovery of the spider even more funny. Best line in the whole fic was from Brennan: “I’ll put him back outside and then you can climb down from that couch like a good little girl.”

The whole Brennan streaking concept was nicely jarringly out of character for present day Brennan, but a great example of how college kids do stupid things they'd never do later in life. And Booth's intrigue in it was fascinating.

And the ending was great. You could have caved and done the B&B clinch ending, but this was much better. And it was great to see Brennan get the last word in.

Well written, very funny fic! I very much enjoyed it...

And people say I'm mean to Booth. This was too funny. I think the two best parts had to be Booth dancing to MC Hammer who consequently is a pastor at my mom's old church, and when he jumped on the back of couch because of the spider. That was classic. It's nice to know I'm not alone in Booth torture.

Goldpiece

LOL love the title! So hilarious. "good housekeeping" haha!