Whoa, this thing is like . . . back in time. This might get confusing, but it's cool.

Ah, creepy ending!
I love this. It's so awesome!

The poor angel thing . . . though I do think this chapter was a little short. I think it would have been alright to kept this one and the last one together . . . maybe not, but more to the third chapter when comes out. I think the first chapter is good how it is.

Man, this was interesting. I liked it alot . . .the poor beings . . .what evere they are. This was really good, and nicely written too

Very intriguing story. I'm adding this to my favourite stories to keep a track on this. Keep up the good work...chapters could be a bit longer though - other then that, this is very good!

Longer Chapters and more description, other then that its very good so far. :D

dun dun dun...yayness! Can't wait for more. keep up the great work and update soon!

gd fic

great.
more discription, adjektives and it would be Fantastic!
The idea is fantastic!
Thank you!
T: Heli

Please do more! I want to see what the angle dose to get revange!

dun dun dun...are we going to have a nice little revenge fic here? Great work so far. keep it up and update soon!

another chapter? Good story, I liked it :D