 TheSecretWeasley5147 2009-06-14 . chapter 11I luav all of teh references to lolCats yoo maik. And Tagalongs kick thin mints butt anyday (I'm still in Girl Scouts.) |
 asdfjk;l 2009-02-13 . chapter 3 McGonagall is acting weird... |
 nightwing27 2009-01-27 . chapter 14good chapter man james is an idiot leaving stuff like that on the floor |
 CrayonsPink 2008-12-01 . chapter 14Yay! AN UPDATE!! I can't wait for another one! |
 Tristan Cartier 2008-11-21 . chapter 14Sort but sweet... good job! |
 Erorfinne 2008-11-20 . chapter 14*facepalm*
You can't update right when people have forgotten about what happened, man! D:
Oh well.
Anyway, I'm glad to see you updated. Seriously.
...YEAH. I can't give you a decent review when so little happened, you know?
..Well, there was the makeout session.
BUT THAT DOESN'T COUNT. D: |
 nightwing27 2008-10-18 . chapter 13an't wait for more chapters |
 nightwing27 2008-10-18 . chapter 12good chapter |
 nightwing27 2008-10-18 . chapter 11now I would love to see herimone's and ron's kids can't wait to read how ron will react |
 nightwing27 2008-10-18 . chapter 10what's that real or a dream was their kid go back to the past |
 CrayonsPink 2008-10-08 . chapter 13This is an EXCELLENT story! Please, upadte soon! I can't wiat1 |
 Erorfinne 2008-10-07 . chapter 13Lametastic? Really? D:
I think I'm hurt. *sniff*
Now, for something much more substantial. It's "duly noted" not "dually noted". Anyway, spelling corrections aside, it was a good chapter. (Though the plot does need to get a move on. *cough* )
I would write some amazing constructive criticism, causing you to launch your way into stardom, but I'm crap at doing that and crap at writing decent reviews as well.
But hey, a lame review's better than no review, right? *holds two thumbs up promisingly* :DD
...RIGHT? DD:
At least I reread the whole fic just to understand this chappie. Does that count for anything?
Oh well. Erm, UpDaTe SoOn??!1onewonvictoryyayhahayoulosepants
P.S. Sorry I can't be "extremely helpful to use this opportunity to comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved. A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding tool for the writer." (Err, Copy+Paste FTW?)
P.P.S. I made this review extra-long just for you. :DD |
 Tristan Cartier 2008-10-07 . chapter 13... WOW... CONFUZLD AGAIN |
 Tristan Cartier 2008-10-07 . chapter 12... WOW |
 Tristan Cartier 2008-10-07 . chapter 11GREAT CHAPTER! |