At least St. Lily recognized that she actually might have done something wrong. Though she'll leave soon and go back to her beloved St. James, at least Severus has had this moment.

it was good very cute.
im so utterly opposed to lily/snape it's not funny, but i liked it. keep writing

Nice vignette except for jarring cliched phrase from Camelot (shining moment).

I must say it's sweet--ONLY if it isn't a romance fic, just a friendship/comfort fic. I totally oppose snape/lily. But I really like your stories!

Oh My Gosh! JUST how I imagined their meeting after death to be...well, not really but you get the idea.
I thought that if they both ended up in Heaven then Lily would meet Snape and they would be sad then forgive each other and be friends again.
Great job, I really liked this story!
(well, I knew Lily would end up in Heaven, I'm not sure about Snape- though I hope he did!)
Loved it,
Katie

Aw -- I hope so badly that they ended up friends in the afterlife. This was really good! GREAT JOB!

This is lovely, I really like reading Severus-afterlife fics. I wrote one with the same title, although it probably didn't turn out this successfully. Nicely done!

It made me cry!
Love your story

I love it! Its perfect!
~Clovergirl22

aw, i really enjoyed this. i was on the verge of crying :O!

Goosebumps. M'dear, I have goosebumps.

It was very well written, and a lovely portrait of them. It rates 70% on my 'Show, Don't Tell' scale.

I can't put my finger on it, but something wasn't right, keeping your fic from being perfect. Very well done, just a little tweaking.

=]

Wow, that was beautiful!
Very bittersweet, or would be but for the happy ending. I liked your descriptions, and how you kept everything in canon with Snape's memories in the books.

i liked the way you entwined your story so well with the occurences in snapes memories. It gave your story a validity which made it far more believable.

i like to believe lily and snape were together after death. how romantic.. lol

keep writing!

love xx

cool
is that all ?