It is very modern and quite interesting, although I would have thought that Aragorn would have been a little kinder than you have portraid him.

Over all this is a good story.

Lydia Andreson

"There, what do you think?"
I think "Narzguls" should be spelt "Nazgûl" - both singular and plural. Or, if you want to sound a bit illiterate, "nazguls" but certainly not NaRzguls!

you already know i think this is great. good job