YAY! love love love

HI! OMG ITS SO CUTE!

its so cute

great story, :) more please if you decide

Aww that was so cute and impossibly sweet! Loved it!

pretty good oneshot

That was good! )

OMG! THAT'S EXACTLY WHAT I WANTED TO HAPPEN!

Omg. When I first saw this episode it had been advertised saying "WIll Elliot and Olivia show their true feelings?" and I was like "omg!" and then when it aired and it came to this I'm sitting their going "omg omg omg, they're gonna kiss!" Aand then i get this "Dick Wolf" wirtten across the screan and I flipped. I ran around the house screaming "OMG I CAN'T BELIEVE THE DIDN'T KISS!"...ok that's a slight exagerations - i didn't run around the house i danced around the living room.

I was so angry. It was pretty hialrious.

Oh well, great work.

My only bitch is the bit about the ciggarette. I don't pick Elliot smoking and I personally wouldn't have put it in but other than that it was awesome!