I loved it. It was a lot better than I expected it to be. The mood was really realistic and the way you wrote it was pretty moving... I''m all sad now... poor Dee... It's such a bitter sweet ending.

Great work!

i cant imagine the hurt dee was feeling right then, if my love died... i would like... die!

OMG i was sobng while i read this.

although the line when he himself died, (Hopefully a cool death, not just dieing in his sleep or something) really did make me laugh. even though he was sad i could see Dee saying something like that.