WOW
that was really good!
love the ending

Nice end! Be careful about paragraphs though, I got really confused when Riza started talking to Ed and Al xD
Love it though.

it's gory but its a really involving story xD I can't wait to read more :P

And we all love Roy.

Yes we do. ^_^

Um this fic is really interesting :D

...but really twisted and kinda wrong, specially the 16 and 23 ages of roy and riza...and the fact she was connected to like four guys at the same time in only threeish chapters...

oh my god i love this its so good! really cant wait for the next update!

this was a long chapter thanks...i think Zach is worse then Jon...he almost..ALMOST makes Jon look good

O! Awesome!

That was awesome! Man, I love this story! You never know what's going to happen next which makes it all the much better! I'm going to go comment on DA now. BTW Can't wait for your next chapter!

Wow, that was really interesting and shocking and it made me happy that Jon was dead but what happened to Zach?! Update soon.

This chatper was so good, it wasn't as bloody as I thought it would be from the way you discribed it. But I was so good, yeah for Royai! ^_^

Hey, I just read all 5 chapters, what a great story! Hope you update soon. :)

Oh this is such a good story, you should put the next chapter out soon becuz I can't wait. ^_^

i just started reading this yesterday and i really like it i think you should update very soon..its really good

its so sweet...i love it!! please update.. i cant wait for more!

Let me get this straight. You passed year 10 w/o doing ANY of your homework. How the h ell did you manage that? Can't Riza just run away until she turns 18? And then her ba stard of a father or anyone else won't have any control over her? Please? That would be one time skip that I REALLY wouldn't mind and would even enjoy. And I am so tired of all these people coming after Riza and trying to get her in bed or marry her! How old is she right now anyway? I can't remember. This is a great chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon. ^_~