Maybe it's because I'm a horribly morbid person that I like this story so much. The details and description that you used just made it all that much better. And talk about your original FF7 storyline!

It does somewhat reminds me of the story of the Monkey Paw when the woman brings her son back from the dead. I applaud your work! Bravo!

Holy **! This is some sick-**, twisted **!

*is totally dazzled*

Holy hell! No wonder you got nominated! Boy, oh boy, was I creeped the ** out. *shudders*

Beautiful. I gagged.

funny, but i kinda want to throw up now.

anyway, good job.

...Holy sh** dude...

Haha. hahahahaha oh my GOD.

There is a sick dark humor to this piece - especially at the end with Cloud's comment.

That the inital thought - this is by far one of my favorite stories, not shocking having been a Genesis winner.

The graphic nature of the imagery really pulled an alien emotion from me, not something I'm used to fanfiction achieving. My stomach turned and twisted in the vile thought of that "monster" your created conecting to the Aeris we all know and love.

Masterful and where the really hit. Beautiful in the most ironic means.

It was a juxtaposition unlike any other to really address such a dark theme hidden in the weakest hero.

I could ramble forever in meaningless compliments, but I feel it better sums up in two words:

Thank you.

Thank you for writing this.

Aerith Gast

MY BROTHER CAME IN AND WAS LIKE, "Whatcha doin'?"
AND I TELL HIM, "I'm reading the best fanfic ever!"
AND HE COMES OVER AND READS SOME OF IT, AND HE'S LIKE, "..."
AFTER A MOMENT HE GOES, "...I thought you liked that romantic Cloti stuff..."
AND I BLINK AND GRIN, "I wanted to try something out of the norm."
AND HE GOES, "Well you hit that one dead on!"

AND NOW HE WANTS TO READ THE REST OF IT!
x'D
WOW.
YOURE SUPAH BRILLIANT.
AND I LIKE THAT ZACK IS BACK...
AH, CLOUD YOU GENIUS YOU.



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Mania. Few of us linger long on the thought of where the fine tripwire delineating sanity and the territory beyond is actually located. Nice to see the explosive (or perhaps soggy?) world beyond explored. Unless you're eating of course.

Had I a glass of tea (and crab), I would raise it to you.

This is, unarguably, the greatest story I have ever read. My friend told me about it, and we actually searched for it for an hour and a half, and she finally found it, and oh lord am I ever glad she did. The detail of the smell, and Cloud's rapidly decreasing mental stability.. all of it was perfect. You've done an excellent job with this :]

wow...that was simply amazing!! kinda reminded me of the short story Monkeys Paw, but not as suspensful.

huh, as macabre as it can be, all I could think about while reading the description of her rotten corpse, her fingers falling and rolling on the floor when Cloud held her hand and such was my upcoming final anatomy exam. *sighs*
now, despite my insanity, I loved Cloud's!! poor little and bigger girls, though. and oh, the ending... so nicely done ^^. and I do agree with what someone wrote before me: Zack would have killed them all. which would either allow Cloud in some kind of post-mortem bliss or make him snap back into reality and die full of regret. god, how I'd love to see the last one done XD
favourited!

Really, really creepy.

Oh my god, this is one seriously twisted fic. And what makes it so great is how it starts off as a serious horror story, and then it turns into a very darkly humorous story. When CLoud puts Marlene into Aeris' lap, and the corpse falls on her... I was simulateonously cringing in horror and laughing. And all the disgusting little details, such as the smell of the corpse, and the braid still attached to Aeris' skull, just add to the mood of the story.

I actually loved how you ended the story so abruptly - suspense can be much more powerful than pure horror, although this story does horror so well. I personally think that Zack would have killed everyone, including Cloud himself, since you put in that little detail about the Buster Sword - and since the Holy magic could be twisted and perverted in the hands of someone with evil intentions, or someone who was mad like Cloud.

Brillant. I'm favoriting this.

That was far beyond disturbing. I LOVED IT.

I almost expected Cloud to start dancing around the kitchen with Aeris... and then I got a little sick. Incredible story!