off to the nxt chapter!

athrun is such jerk in this story, but the ending is good. I like the way you write your story, this is a very ineteresting story. I can't wait to read them.

The whoole story was OK not very good!!
But, i just love the ending

ano, it's wedding not weeding. weeding is to do with the garden...but nice story!

SUGHOI! One of the best fanfiction I've ever read!! Keep writing dude!

It's Finally finished! its a nice story except the grammatical errors...

hey! i finally got a fanfic account! it's a good story, one of the stories that i waited the author to update! :)

Aw...that was so sweet and cute...but I'm sad...because it's over already...*wipe tears*...you did an awesome job on this fanfic...I really enjoy the time I spent reading it...and thank you for putting my name up...I feel special now...*give a big toothy grin*...and once again...you did a terrfic awesome fantastic job...*gives a round of applause*...I hope to read more of your works in the future...good luck and happy writings!

I browsed throuh your LJ, and I discovered that you really have a talent for drawing. Your fanarts are very nice because they were well drawn and , well, you really have the gift to wield your artistic skills beautifully.

But, of all the words that you could misspell, for a lot of times, why weeding? Please, you were already reprimanded for a lot of times and I think if you were me ( i think there is something wrong with this, anyway), you would really be ticked by seeing a simple word such as 'wedding' be misspelled into 'weeding'.

You have a talent for writing. You could be a good narrator. I have been reading fanfiction for almost four years now and I haven't even written a single story because I don't really have the knack for creating fiction that could entertain others.

I have seen many crappy stories(yes, i know that this is fiction, but there should still be logic in them), crappy authors(those who demand for reviews even if their story is really crappy like wrong grammar, bad formatting and a lot more) and crappy reviewers(maybe your now classifying me as one, i hope not. Crappy reviewers are those who do not respect authors like writing in ALL CAPS demanding that the story must be updated soon.

Anyways, I was really amazed, and still am, that you also write fanfiction to improve some aspect in your life like in your studies. Me? dont bother.

Oh well, I say that you really have talent and your using and sharing it.

God Bless to your future endeavors.

as fast as possible, -->as soon as possible
peeked -> i think you mean, 'pecked'
weeding -> i'm sorry, but i was really irritated when I saw this,
misspeeling --> misspellings , from the root word : spell
spectacle -> i think you mean 'obstacle'
hear --> here

let's spread the asucaga love!! congratulations for this story!! :) cheers!! :)
-shin-

NICE.

woah! that's finish?!
I want some more!!
any way good job!
and tip before you post it check the spelling and grammars first.
thanks for mentioning me!!

^^ Yays!

Wow... Athrun sure keeps Cagalli busy ;) It was a naughty ending =D
I'll be waiting for your vampire fic =) What pairing?