*Grimaces* Well, immortality isn't for everyone... But then, jokes probably need to be timed to something lighter than this. ^o^" Deep, dark stuff, of course. The psychology behind it all is fasinating stuff!

Every bit of conscience in my body screams that not even Voldemort deserves this. Thank Merlin you're not listening to my conscience.

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the Dark Lord realized that thirteen years of agony without a body was nothing compared to what Potter was inflicting on him at that moment. It took days of unimaginable pain for Voldemort to die. In the end, Potter had expelled the Dark Lord from his body for the second time.

“Blood of the enemy willingly given,” the witch said with passion. “You will resurrect our plaything!”
The mudblood laughed uproariously at the word “plaything.” At that moment, as if on cue, Potter stepped out from behind the throne. The warm liquid of Voldemort’s piss trickled down his leg.

And even though Voldemort had created the thing that was now Potter, the boy had exceeded the Dark Lord in his cruelty.

“I don’t think we repaid you enough last time for what you did to us.”

“Is that why you became such a backstabbing bastard? Because you’ve got a miniscule pecker?”Her smile slowly changed into an exaggerated pout, “I’m sorry, Peter, but that just won’t do. It’s not the correct size to teach Voldemort a proper lesson about pain.”

Voldemort knew it was pointless to beg; and he had every intention not to give his tormenters the satisfaction. But his resolve vanished when the offending weapon ripped into him. He screamed in agony and collapsed to the floor. The blood flowed from his destroyed anus and poured down his legs. As the fire of pain raged through his body, Voldemort sobbed pathetically, “Please. Please, stop.”

Clapping her hands together rapidly, she cheered; “This is going to be so much fun!”
She hopped over to Potter and spoke excitedly. “Rip his manhood off! No, no, break his fingers! No, wait! Bite his ears off!”
It was as if Granger was a little child on her birthday and couldn’t decide on what activity they should do first on her special day.
“I know, I know; take the stick out of his bottom and shove it down his throat!” she continued. “Oh, no, wait. I know, ram your thumbs into his eyes first!”

“And just think, Tommy, once you die – which won’t be for a while; I mean we’re prepared – we have loads of healing potions to keep you alive for days and days and days,” Granger said as she twirled in a circle happily. “We’ll just have Wormtail lob off another piece of his body to resurrect you and we can do this all over again! And again! And again!”
As Potter pried his victim’s skin from his ribs, Voldemort cursed the day he had ever heard of Horcruxes.

I love your scream series. Nice and dark, a good writing style for this type of fic. The insanity and cruelty was very well written. I could almost feel the emotions of harry and hermione, as well as the sheer terror of their victims. very well done. The only suggestion I can think of is to go back and write the scenes where harry and hermione became what they are in this series.

This was the most interesting one so far. Gotta say, im not unhappy that I read these.

That is F-ing HARSH!

I love it.

How to 'out-Dark Lord' the Dark lord in 10 easy steps!

Or with one chair leg...

You're very good at this.
I'm riveted. I can't stop reading these stories. They are gripping, and the imagery and characterizations are perfect.

Excellent! I imagine that even Hermione will get bored with having the same person tortured for weeks. At least if she doesn't get any variation. This is by far the most brilliant HP/HG story of all. It gives me such pleasant dreams when I read them before going to sleep.

This series is possibly the most twisted bit of fanfiction that I have ever read...Bravo - seriously well done. Hermione gives me chills when I imagine her voice. Harry, with the white hair and carved smile, deliciously terrifying.

God, you are friggin sick! I love these stories, they are friggin Great... lol I hope you continue to write these type of stories, there are so few of them out there...Well, i'll let you get back to your writing,, ttfn...

awesome! to use the fact of voldemort´s horocruxes as a way to keep him alive and keep making him suffer, was truly amazing pure genius!

I do belive I have said that I like a lot the way you write and explain the ways harry and hermione torture.

It is really well writen, took me completly into the story and it made me imagine what would it be to skin alive voldemort.

Are you going to keep up with this series? ´cause I´m dying to read another one. keep up this amazing job as a writer that you´re doing.

nice

Oh my..this is very twisted.. Harry and Hermione's plan to keep letting Voldemort be resurected to torture him again and again..I do enjoy this story and hope you continue.

Holy shit, Shawn! I have to say, I didn't think you could get to this level.

When I first saw that you were bringing back Voldemort, I thougt you might jump the shark and have them all team up and torture people together. I was not expecting this... I know now that I should have given you more credit, as the layers go so much deeper than that.

This has brought me to new levels of revulsion, and morbid as I am - I absoutely love it! I find myself going deeper and deeper into the rabbit hole with you.

The way she licked the blood from Harry's fingers, and the way her eyes lit up with delight thinking of better ways to fuel his pain is so enrapturing. It will be so hard for me to go back to reading SoG now. This style suits you so well...

They are well beyond the salvation, and are well on their way to damnation, but I can't help but pity and love them still. They are so desperately clnging to each other, as if they were their own life support. The fact that they survived at all I think is the worst part of it. Ron at least escaped his would-be-doomed life, but they are prisoners of their "success.". Death would have been a greater gift, where as now their only sparks of life come through pleasing eachother's demented needs.

As always (insert pleading here) I cannot wait to continue this tale of woe, and appreciate that I got this update so quickly. I am very self centered, and have begun to think of your updates as tokens of affection from you to me. So, thank you for my gift, I await the next.

With love from your faithful number one fan,

Court

Well written and fun to see Voldemort and Wormtail get a little payback.

However, Riddle now knows what he is facing and he is still immortal.

Once he is dead again, he can escape in his vapor form. Barring that, he merely has to endure a few days, months, years (whatever) before something inevitably stops his tormentors (boredom, death by old-age, etc.)

Voldy will eventually be free again. When he is, he will be able to: possess wizards and resurrect himself in secret; to create an additional horcrux and take other measures; make any surviving horcruxes Potter-proof; and finally, if Potter has not already died of old-age, finish an emotionally crippled enemy who has no further surprises.

Victory goes to the patient and Potter won't last.

Couldn't happen to a nicer wizard; an excellent case of the punishment fitting the crime.

I hope your muse returns to something less dark, though.

Tom A.