That's amazing.

Hi,

VERY well-written, but I'd like a second chapter. Who's been shot, Shawn? Who's watching, Lassie? Henry? I'd like follow-up.

-Olivia

that was interesting...i completely disagree with potterwatch...i think it was juliet and shawn was the one standing over her...but i do think you should write a sequel and explain it all.

GREAT! I LOVE it! and I agree with Potterwatch, you should totally continue! Kudos!

Wow. That was amazing. The detail was so real. I could imagine exactly what s/he was feeling. I think my favorite line was "The pain is still there, but somehow, in the background. Burning and stinging and pulling you inside out, but your mind is elsewhere." I loved the way you wrote it.

You should invest in a sequel; I want to know more about what happened to the person. It was Shawn, wasn't it?

!Potterwatch