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Reviews for: Move Along
Jabri
2008-05-30 . chapter 1
Hey Bob!

I love this one! It is really nice and I like it that Chloe helps Jack out. You characterize her very well. Anyway your characters are never ooc that's also why you one of my favourite authors!
So please go on writing :)

Best wishes,
J.
andbingowashisnamo
2007-09-28 . chapter 1
oh wow that was super! i really love the idea that after the end of the finale he would go to see chloe. that is what happens in my own personal brain-canon. lol. great story tho!
happyhooligan2001
2007-09-21 . chapter 1
In the end Jack went to the only person he could trust utterly. He and Morris didn't even seem jealous of each other although they each love Chloe in their own way. This wasn't about love or sex, it was about an unbreakable bond between two people.
ChloeRulz
2007-09-21 . chapter 1
That was just superb. Thank you so much!! It was a great way to have Jack move on and to the one person he could always, always turn to no matter how crazed or desperate the situation. This is exactly what I imagined happening when Day 6 ended. You captured it beautifully.

Arianna
L'insomnie des etoiles
2007-09-19 . chapter 1
That was really sweet and a very good way to finish the episode. Hope to read you again soon!
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