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| MoonPrincess623 2008-05-09 ch 13,  | abuseLMAO Pluto with GOhan? lol |
| MoonPrincess623 2008-05-09 ch 8, | abuseI think Chaos went into mamoru...anyway its not called transforamtion stick, its trans... pen or Power Stick |
| MoonPrincess623 2008-05-09 ch 7, | abuseI hate mamoru...yours...he is such an **, he needs to be knocked down a peg or a million..heehee I LOVE VEGATA! I still wonder ho whe and Buma got togtether sigh |
| MoonPrincess623 2008-05-09 ch 2, | abuseLOl can't wait to see what happenes |
| MoonPrincess623 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuse...I don't get it, didn't see just say that now that she wasn't sailor moon that she felt useless, and I LOVE HARUKA! I just wish she was a dude, like most thought, then I would LOVE HER MORE MORE MORE! LOL anymore MORE MORE MORE |
| Taeniaea 2008-04-27 ch 16, | abusegreat story |
| Cassie Ruesch 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseok two things to run quickly through...1st before u post read through it outloud to yourself it may help find those areas that don't really make sense...to where the reader has to re-write that area themself...(well it helps me) and 2 whats with calling it "the chaos"? it's abit annoying...yes it's not chaos it's just a bigger part of it...but calling it "the chaos" is a bit much chaos is fine everyone understands that it's just a bigger part of it... But other than that it's great story i really did enjoy it and i'm enjoying the sequel!! keep up the good stories! |
| Silver Moon Goddess1 2008-03-27 ch 15, | abuseAww sweet story. *silver moon goddess |
| Fangirl44 2008-03-19 ch 15, | abuseyep a sequel is so needed |
| TsukinoGoddess 2008-03-16 ch 15, | abusei wanna read more so i totally think you should post the sequal. |
| liveforDBZ 2008-03-03 ch 15, | abuseno no no no no. you cannot end it here. where is the sequal! THI IS CRUEL! grr... update the sequal...i beg you! |
| Lady-Raini 2008-03-03 ch 15, | abuseuh DUH YOU SHOULD WRITE A SEQUEL! lol no prob on not using my comment, but hey maybe you can use it somehow in another I don't mind. lol Let me know if you are going to continue this one. It would be awesome if you did. lol |
| Rini-chan 2008-03-02 ch 15, anon. | abusePlease post up the sequel as soon as its ready! Don't end the storyline here just as it's getting good. *pouts* Not to sound mean or anything, but I say Usagi shouldn't have wasted her powers bringing everyone back to life at the expense of her own life. Didn't the Z warriors ever tell her about the Dragonballs and what their capable of? *lol* |
| Android 24 2008-03-02 ch 15, | abuseNO! USAGI! Oh you are just so mean! :-) Now i DEFINATLY have got to read the sequal! Hurry up and post it soon! Awesome story by the way...loved it. :-) |
| LunarStar Princess Krystal 2008-03-02 ch 15, | abuseWow that was a beautiful ending. I can't wait for the sequel so you can bring Usagi back to life and be with Trunks, because this ending is the type that makes me want to read what happens next. Well that's all I can say, I hope that you Update with the sequel Soon. ^V^ |