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Reviews for: A breath of eternity
Ruby Powell
2009-12-05 . chapter 2
Please continue! I love it so far!

The writing is amazing-- not just the plot, your writing style too! It rules WAY over mine!

- Ruby
StarofCalamity
2009-10-14 . chapter 2
Cool
Update please
Anily AKW-DPP
2009-02-28 . chapter 2
i never thought that when i searched Darius in Cirque Du Freak that one of the results would be by you... no offense.
this is great so far. i can't wait to see the next chapter! ^^
no me gusta nonreviewers too... but i do it a lot... ^^;
keep on writing~
Anily
and that mistake in the disclaimer in the first chapter could've been mistaken for Darren Shan Saga... except for the fact that it said Dan- ... ^^; i end up with that every now and then but find out about the mistake when someone reads it to check over it... ^^;
LoveDrunkB'tch1026
2008-07-14 . chapter 2
Wow. I keep reading spoilers even if I'm on book 8.. ^~^"
The Sabbit
2007-11-18 . chapter 2
:D I really like the idea. Please continue! I'll give you cokies!
Always23
2007-09-23 . chapter 2
O.. Me gusta your story! ;D Can't wait to read more
Vampirepaw
2007-09-22 . chapter 1
heyy! tahat was a greatly writte with the best plott! u gotta continue >< soon.. also can u add a lil mika into it my fave character..ty!keepwriting
AauK
2007-09-21 . chapter 2
Great fic, its well written, well set out and you've got a pretty sound story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Darth Vyper
2007-09-21 . chapter 2
I believe this is the first time I've read a story in Darius's perspective. It's really nice and very well written - I'm definitely hooked to this one. The boiling suspense and killer cliffhangers are the best though - keep up the good work !

~Jo
Twisted Ingenue
2007-09-19 . chapter 1
This is magnificant. Honestly, I've never seen many stories involving Darius and what happens in the future...it always makes me freak out a little...but...that's usally because most of it it cliche' and bad...NOT THIS! This is amazing! You're dialogue flows excellently! That is no mean feat, I might add. PLEASE CONTINUE! I'M HOOKED NOW!
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