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| meskup 2002-02-11 ch 1, | abuseIt was sweet. Good work |
| sorato fan 2001-08-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseNICE WELL DONE.YOU ARE A EXCELLENT WRITER. |
| Cute Lil Sora (too lazy to ... 2001-08-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseIts cute!! |
| Nyaromon 2001-08-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseFirst of all, you should have put a lot better summary. It had nothing to do with the story, luckily I read your fic anyway. For your summary you should put a short example of the plot, and maybe the couples that are in it. Another thing is that this fic goes way to fast, and actually doesn't really have a plot in the first place. I'm sorry if I sound harsh, because I'm not flaming. It was an ok so-so story, I'm just saying my true opinion of what I thought. Sorato and kindof-Taiora are actually pretty good couples, though. I'm sure you'd be an excellent writer if you took more time and thought into your fics. |