i think this is a really nice start and i look forward to reading the rest of the story.

great just great! i've been searching for something like this with a good story and it's well writen on top of that ! so i'm looking forward to the next chap so... UPDATE! please...?

Nice! Looks good so far, and I like the title's concept. Looking forward to the next chapter!

o. this idea is really really good and i loved the way to made riza be named roy. that was hilarious. this idea is very original and i cant wait for the next chapter!

Nice start!! Can't wait to read more- update soon, 'kay? ^^

Ri-chan

Great work! Update soon!

This sounds pretty interesting, but you have to recheck some things like typographical errors. ^^,

Oh... I do like the premise of this story. I hope you continue it. It was very well written and the set up is just great. :)

The summary is very intriguing. I really like the start and the way you write. Great job and i'm looking forward to more chapters..

Erinn~

nice idea! i'd love to see this story progress further into the 'relms of Royai-ness'.Please keep it up!

Interesting premise you have here, but a few suggestions:

1. At one point you use "claming" instead of "calming."
2. You have the Thief Head refer to Roy as "West" even though he was apparently never told Roy's fake last name.

This looks interesting. I'm assuming there will be 26 chapters, so I'll be sticking around for a while if that's the case. Even if it isn't, I'm looking forward to what this story brings. 'Til next chapter!