i love it but you leave off at the best parts thats like not reading the last chapter of hpdh you should continue some of the life with derek storys.

aw this is a cute little story!=)

too cute.

Loved it!

Aww. So. Freaking. Cute. That was soo in-character of Derek. And the ending line -- loved it. Where do you come up with these story ideas! lmao. Really good!

loved it update soon

Very wonderful story, and certainly a wonderful first story of yours to read. I am very pleased with the plot and characters. A bit cheesy, yes, but then again, that seems to be my preference these days :)

I look forward to reading more of your work, provided it is as impressive as this :)

I loved it! Very sweet and romantic.

Luv MRB ;)

Aw! THAT WAS THE SWEETEST THING! After he was a complete jackass of course. lol Doesn't it always work out that way though, you're only super great after you've made an ** of yourself. hehe.

~Chica~

AW, it was SO good.

Hey, can I use that Ipod line for real life? It's seriously cute. How did you get that? Did you just think of it, or did you get it from somewhere else or...?

Yeah, so awesome awesome (one more) awesome job :)