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SpYdA
2008-06-20
ch 3,
abuse14 degrees C!

are you insane?!?!?!?! you think that that is cool?!?!?!?!?

that is godamn freezing!
Jimmy Candlestick
2008-05-15
ch 25,
abuseokay, sorry for not reviewing in a while...i've been feeling lazy. anywho, i've enjoyed the story, 'cept for this ending...first, i don't think Tom would actually do that, he seemed to like the idea that Alex was a spy. second, i would've thought that MI6 would've caught that. however, i do love the face that Tom did get drafted...he did so want to be a spy...
Eagles Eye
2008-05-11
ch 26,
abuseAw, poor Tom. Yeah, I think you should write a fanfic about him; if you want to that is :P
Great story XD Hope to see more
hails
2008-05-11
ch 26, anon.
abuseWA-HAY!!
You done it!!
I, personally, think it's a very nice touch at the end of such a long-going story.
*grin* I spy my name too :D


I'm gonna miss that story now *sobs*
Best of luck with the may=be sequel.

Your loyal and now-sad reviewer, hails
Nowayjose
2008-05-11
ch 25, anon.
abuseTom cannot join MI6! That's so cruel! You're so mean lol!
Scarybee
2008-05-11
ch 25, anon.
abuseNice story, but way too short! Where's the mission? Also, I wanted more torture detail - i know, I'm weird like that, but you said to review!
Jake Caldefore
2008-05-11
ch 26,
abuseWoohoo! I'm right under Artemis Fowl...and above a bunch of others...

Anyways, congratulations on the completion and popularity of your effin' awesome story. Kudos!

Sequel? I'll co-author...

Keep writing,
Jake
SheWeapon1
2008-05-10
ch 25,
abuseLOL excellent. I kept thinking someone would step forward and say, hey i went to school with Alex Rider or he went to our school or i taught Alex Rider. But who knows they would have probably said it was a differnet boy with the same name. :)
AleksandryaGregonovitch
2008-05-10
ch 25,
abuseIt's over! Excellent book! Yes Make A Sequel! UPDATE SOON!
katie
2008-05-10
ch 25, anon.
abuseoh!
its over!
could you actually suspend mi6?
wouldn't the whole world be destroyed or something if you did?
anyway...
hails
2008-05-10
ch 25, anon.
abuseWoah.
Twas weird seeing that...it should have never ended.

Actually, if you wanted to make it slightly longer -and..well, sweet- you could put down all the reviewers names. That would make a nice touch!

Yes, please! A sequel!! It cannot END
hails
2008-05-09
ch 24, anon.
abuseI don't believe I reviewed the last one. My apologies if I didn't.

I can't believe it gonna be all over so soon!! I've been reading this for 8 months now!!
And The Sun is a very popular tabloid in Britain. Key word, tabloid. I do believe you made a good choice there!!

Anyways, sad to see this end.

And MI6 would cover up...I mean, they're MI6 XD

Your now-lonely reviewer, hails
Kyntak
2008-05-09
ch 1,
abuseThis is awesome! I love the sensations. Could you take a look at my Alex Rider fanfic story, and tell me what you think? I'm not sure I captured the Horowitz style.
Gold is power
2008-05-09
ch 24,
abuseup date soon!
you can't let then get away with it.
AleksandryaGregonovitch
2008-05-08
ch 24,
abuseLoved It!! Answer to the question: No! they shouldn't get off that easily for what they did to Alex! Blunt and Jones should definatly get kicked out! K-Unit should step forward too! I'm rambling...Update Soon!
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