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| SpYdA 2008-06-20 ch 3, | abuse14 degrees C! are you insane?!?!?!?! you think that that is cool?!?!?!?!? that is godamn freezing! |
| Jimmy Candlestick 2008-05-15 ch 25, | abuseokay, sorry for not reviewing in a while...i've been feeling lazy. anywho, i've enjoyed the story, 'cept for this ending...first, i don't think Tom would actually do that, he seemed to like the idea that Alex was a spy. second, i would've thought that MI6 would've caught that. however, i do love the face that Tom did get drafted...he did so want to be a spy... |
| Eagles Eye 2008-05-11 ch 26, | abuseAw, poor Tom. Yeah, I think you should write a fanfic about him; if you want to that is :P Great story XD Hope to see more |
| hails 2008-05-11 ch 26, anon. | abuseWA-HAY!! You done it!! I, personally, think it's a very nice touch at the end of such a long-going story. *grin* I spy my name too :D I'm gonna miss that story now *sobs* Best of luck with the may=be sequel. Your loyal and now-sad reviewer, hails |
| Nowayjose 2008-05-11 ch 25, anon. | abuseTom cannot join MI6! That's so cruel! You're so mean lol! |
| Scarybee 2008-05-11 ch 25, anon. | abuseNice story, but way too short! Where's the mission? Also, I wanted more torture detail - i know, I'm weird like that, but you said to review! |
| Jake Caldefore 2008-05-11 ch 26, | abuseWoohoo! I'm right under Artemis Fowl...and above a bunch of others... Anyways, congratulations on the completion and popularity of your effin' awesome story. Kudos! Sequel? I'll co-author... Keep writing, Jake |
| SheWeapon1 2008-05-10 ch 25, | abuseLOL excellent. I kept thinking someone would step forward and say, hey i went to school with Alex Rider or he went to our school or i taught Alex Rider. But who knows they would have probably said it was a differnet boy with the same name. :) |
| AleksandryaGregonovitch 2008-05-10 ch 25, | abuseIt's over! Excellent book! Yes Make A Sequel! UPDATE SOON! |
| katie 2008-05-10 ch 25, anon. | abuseoh! its over! could you actually suspend mi6? wouldn't the whole world be destroyed or something if you did? anyway... |
| hails 2008-05-10 ch 25, anon. | abuseWoah. Twas weird seeing that...it should have never ended. Actually, if you wanted to make it slightly longer -and..well, sweet- you could put down all the reviewers names. That would make a nice touch! Yes, please! A sequel!! It cannot END |
| hails 2008-05-09 ch 24, anon. | abuseI don't believe I reviewed the last one. My apologies if I didn't. I can't believe it gonna be all over so soon!! I've been reading this for 8 months now!! And The Sun is a very popular tabloid in Britain. Key word, tabloid. I do believe you made a good choice there!! Anyways, sad to see this end. And MI6 would cover up...I mean, they're MI6 XD Your now-lonely reviewer, hails |
| Kyntak 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is awesome! I love the sensations. Could you take a look at my Alex Rider fanfic story, and tell me what you think? I'm not sure I captured the Horowitz style. |
| Gold is power 2008-05-09 ch 24, | abuseup date soon! you can't let then get away with it. |
| AleksandryaGregonovitch 2008-05-08 ch 24, | abuseLoved It!! Answer to the question: No! they shouldn't get off that easily for what they did to Alex! Blunt and Jones should definatly get kicked out! K-Unit should step forward too! I'm rambling...Update Soon! |