 Dragoon-Yue 2008-02-20 . chapter 1UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE! I want to know what happens! This is a fantastic start! Please, please put the next part up soon! |
 WREIN 2007-10-06 . chapter 1oh, now this is a new story. I don't think I've read one like this before...Update ASAP!
P.s. is Chrono/Chrno a pedophile? you said she was FOUR years old! |
 OtherCat1 2007-09-22 . chapter 1Interesting concept, but too much tell, not enough show. ((Which is to say, plopping down all the backstory in one go ruins the plot/pacing. Then again, I'm addicted to the slow reveal.)) |
 Synonymous Brian 2007-09-20 . chapter 1OMG! ECLIPSE! -acts like a rabid fangirl-
Lol, anyways, this was really cool I hope ya update soon! |
 Cranberry Window 2007-09-20 . chapter 1Chibi's back!
*dances* |
 Sailor Tiamat 2007-09-20 . chapter 1This is a really good intro, I can't wait for the rest! ^.^ |
 Caroline 2007-09-20 . chapter 1 Ahh, this seems really interesting so far! Keep up with the good work!
This whole imprinting thing sounds really similar to what happens in Eclipse by Stephenie Meyer... I wonder if you are a fan of her books =) |
 snekochan 2007-09-20 . chapter 1*gasp!* Oh wow! This sounds really cool! Do Chrono and Rosette meet while she's there? Is he in his adult of child form- ? and more ? *eager kitty* |