that was great! short, but just amazing! i love reading about Eb's past

Oh! I LOVE the ending! This is so good and yet so short! Wow. I really did like the insight though. Very good! Write more!

Like... whoa... Very deep. I like:)

Ooh, cool, a nice little Ebony's past story

perfect, more like that please its gr8. Ebony's the best character .