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SerenusAeterna
2009-05-24 . chapter 18
Oh...My God...This was awesome!
Lecidre
2008-09-02 . chapter 18
Oh, I'm so glad that they'd defeated Unicron in the end... Jade's past is tragic, I felt so sad for her when I read that part in chapter 16. That boy is such an **.

It's interesting to see the Optimus/Maggie part - I've never thought they could be a pairing when I first saw the movie until reading this fic. The pairing seems kind of awkward to me because I still can't imagine Optimus being with another femme beside Elita One, but seeing the Autobot commander happy somehow made me feel warm in heart.

And the prank Lennox and Ironhide played is just awesome! Good job, you two! And I'm sure Sam and Bumblebee would take their sweet revenge afterwards...

Anyway, this is a nice fic! Hope you're doing well on the sequel!
ABSilverstreak
2008-08-30 . chapter 1
Okay, you got me hooked with the commentary between Sam and Trent. I absolutely love this! *faves story and continues on*
Dragowolf
2008-08-30 . chapter 18
WOnderful! Wonderful wonderful wonderful wonderful!

I loved it all! The romance, the action, the humor! WONDERFUL!

There were some sad parts but overall a very wonderful read!! The writing style was good too!

Loved it all! Great job! I'm off to read the squeal as soon as I get the chance!

Wonderful read! Wonderful wonderful read!
Lecidre
2008-08-25 . chapter 6
Aww, I'm suprised to see those three Transformers showed up in Bay's movie... I almost forgot their presence until reading this fic. I think Hacker is an adorable Decepticon, he seemed to have a liking to Jade after she gave him the energon goodie...Maybe the universal greeting and the energon goodies really help?

I love the way you described the friendship between Lennox and Ironhide. Seeing the two of them fighting against the Decepticons made me feel excited. And both Jade and Rose had made their appearances now - thank goodness Ratchet hadn't crushed Rose to pieces or he would never forgive himself for killing an innocent human.

Nice work!
Lecidre
2008-08-22 . chapter 1
So Arcee had become Unicron's slave? Poor Arcee, she was so unlucky to fight Unicron alone. She isn't really going to kill Optimus, is she? I hope she would be fine afterwards.

By the way, I was shocked to see Bumblebee stomp over Trent's car and freak the football player out in front of those people... Primus, you were acting just like a Decepticon, `Bee! *panic look*

I wonder what the government will act to cover up the presence of the alien giant robots after this incident... Nice story. Keep up the good work on writing your sequel! :)
Dragowolf
2008-08-21 . chapter 4
Great chapter! I love it! There is only one thing I hate... Simmons... I want to beat the guy upside the head... hard. And several times.

After that great job! I'll read more soon! I just need more time!

And I love the building romance between Arcee and Bumblebee!
windy
2008-08-09 . chapter 12
Hey i love your story but your use of exclamation points is redundant, you don't need half as many as you use.
Dragowolf
2008-08-05 . chapter 2
Your version of picking on Ironhide... I LOVE! Great first two chapters! I so have to find time to read the rest!

And I hope there is a way to save Arcee!

Oh why... WHY CANN'T I HAVE MORE TIME TO READ THIS WONDERFUL FIC?!?!?

Great story!
SkyHighFan
2008-05-22 . chapter 17
That was good. And Galvatron redeemed himself a little there at the end, helping to destroy Unicron even though he knew it would destroy him since he was only being kept alive by Unicron's power since Sam killed him in the Battle of Mission City
Dan
2008-05-21 . chapter 2
gota say this is very nicely puty together, it picks up nicely where the movie left off. awesome work ^_^
Dan
2008-04-23 . chapter 1
Over all very well written, effectivly adding older charaters to the new transformers look. All and all I look forward to reading the rest of it. Very nice work =^_^=
ViolentBigGrl
2008-01-23 . chapter 18
Ok..that WAS AWESOME!
Jay Tuthill
2008-01-09 . chapter 18
Great story! I really love the last chapter! Especially the prank that Ironhide and lenoxx pulled on Bumblebee and Sam! I can't wait to see what they do to get back at them in Roads to never ending light! I can't wait to see who Laserbreak is and wht the Decepiticons are up to now! I also can't wait to see what happens between Sam and Mikealea in Roads to Neverending light! Keep up the good work! E-mail me to tell me when it is up please! I would really appreciate it!
ArmoredSoul
2008-01-09 . chapter 18
BBxRC.
KAWAII!
XD
*attackglompofDOOM*
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