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Reviews For: Virtuoso of Deceit

Tressa
2008-01-16
ch 1,
abuseThis was great. I especially loved the part about talking to girls and him wonderin if "stop right there" counted as talking. This was great. It was a little sad as well, though, with the mention of Kon and Bart. Granted, I haven't read a comic in a while, but the last I knew they were both gone. I also wiped a tear at the last line - "how many good deeds it took to balance out lying to his dad". Poor Tim. I miss those times. Anyway, enough babbling. Great job! I loved it! I loved Tim's characterization! Wonderful story!
Nikoru-chan
2007-10-20
ch 1,
abuseLoved the tail end of this one; "well, there had been a young woman involved in the hostage situation and if you counted 'stop right there' . . ." snicker. Neatly done, and a nice bit of character developemnt both for Tim and for Kon.
ghostninja85
2007-09-21
ch 1,
abuseThis story makes me a bit sad. I really wish Kon and Bart were alive right now.

Tim's lost his two freaking best friends.

Great fic. I liked the idea.
Protector of Canon2
2007-09-20
ch 1,
abuseWell, there's no canonical proof that he's NOT...

Anyways, I like the idea that there's a Jewish superhero.

Heck, you'd think there would be gicen how overrepresented we are in everything else...
trecebo
2007-09-20
ch 1,
abuseFair dinkum. I think it's cool. I mean, you pointed out that most don't even blink that Diana is the product of mythology, of all things, and yet, Tim being Jewish, or Flash being Protestant, or Canary being Baptist--heaven forfend! Peeps are tolerant of those who are least tolerant and intolerant of those most likely to be tolerant. Does that make sense?

Anyway, props to ya for a cool story.
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