wright another please cause so far this s the best fanfiction ever but try harder on misspeled words

pretty good story i hope you continue it also you got this story in naruto/hinata this is more of a naruto/oc any ways u did a good job

Um... when you say something is the best Naruto fan fic... maybe at least use correct...

grammer

sentance structure

spelling

As it was, I found it hard to understand... but that's just my opinion. Keep working on it. Good job, anyway, and get a program with spell check.

How old are you and what is your native language? I don't want to be overly critical but your mastery of the English language is... flawed to say the least. It is getting to the point where the mechanics of your writing, or lack thereof, is making the story unreadable.