|Reviews for Naruto: A waring era story|
| BlackWing84 8/24/11 . chapter 13
wright another please cause so far this s the best fanfiction ever but try harder on misspeled words
| LordHatredX 9/20/07 . chapter 13
pretty good story i hope you continue it also you got this story in naruto/hinata this is more of a naruto/oc any ways u did a good job
| Tazaki4 9/20/07 . chapter 13
Um... when you say something is the best Naruto fan fic... maybe at least use correct...
As it was, I found it hard to understand... but that's just my opinion. Keep working on it. Good job, anyway, and get a program with spell check.
| DreadCraft 9/20/07 . chapter 1
How old are you and what is your native language? I don't want to be overly critical but your mastery of the English language is... flawed to say the least. It is getting to the point where the mechanics of your writing, or lack thereof, is making the story unreadable.