Wow. Very eloquently written. You have a brilliant mastery of the language. Geoffrey's thoughts are perfect and I love the way you had them "get together."

Thanks for the great read on the great couple :)

- Kitty

This is the epitome of romance for me =D And I damn well enjoyed every bit of it! Man, this has everything! Romance, drama, angst, but still concluding with a happy ending. YOU ARE AWESOME!

Those last 3 paragraphs were awe-inspiring. There was so much emotion there; "when in one moment, you gained more than you'd ever dared hope for" and "The knight reflected that if heaven did indeed exist on earth... this must truly be it."

Simply amazing. I wish I could write like that. Good job!

There's a slight tear of happiness welling up in my eye right now. WHOAH; that was VERY good.

nae so much cute as romantic. okay, the magebear guesses.

"(pull out a pretty ring) knowing in his very soul she'd joyfully say yes"

"(I must wish him the best... as long as) she's happy"

"The thought that someone under his command was the target of her affection (bore a surge of jealousy)"

I fear I'm lost...

It was cute and nice to have a non Ike Elincia for once nonetheless.

Excellent.

I really liked how you described everything. Awesome story :)

Wow. WOW. That was great. I'm not quite sure how to say this without starting to babble like an idiot, but...I'm quite impressed with your imagery as far as Geoffrey's emotions are concerned. To love someone unattainable...that is EXACTLY what it feels like, so either you've been through that before or your imagination is uber-good. Besides all that, it was super sweet, and gave me that random impulse to review...woohoo! So...congratulations, that was some good readin'!

This was great! I loved the descriptions, and I loved how everything played out. There's simply not a whole lot wrong with it.

Please keep on doing things like this! You're doing the world a favor by doing so!

Frog: Cute cute CUTE!! And very well written. That's all I've got to say. Bye!

Lovely. A beautiful couple and wonderful love story. Geoffrey's emotions were spot on, and I loved the vivid discriptions, as usual. Elincia was also wonderful, and you write them both so very well.

Nice one, keep up the good work!

How wonderfully romantic~!

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So adorable XD
Would make me like Elincia XD