great chapter update soon please

Nice work. I enjoyed it. I liked love triangles. Be it VXHXA or VXHXD. Nicely done!

aaw...so cute!

OMG!
I so thought Allen was going to die!
I would've been so sad if there was a character death!
Yes, I will give you my email =3
I remember back in the day when you could see the author's email from their profile!
Well, anyways it is: an.insanely.sane.azn (at)

Well allrn I just oh it's your story glad he had a change of heart Now about the **?? Talia hope she gets hers!

And don't forget to explain how come Van is still alive even though he sprout his wings.
The end of this chapter was surprising, Allen didn't turned out to be such an ** as he was in the beginning.

what's Van gonna do? is he going to be able to save Hitomi in time? only a couple more chapters to A True Hearts Calling? man... this is a good story too. can you also add me to your mailing list?

O_O
What will Van be able to do?!?!?!
Update soon! =D
Oh, and Happeh New Years!
I would also like to be put on your mailing list please!

Allen is a basstard! plan and simple! don't make it sad talia needs to killed too! Hitomi grow up! see needs to see what is in front of her!! keep it coming

When I got the alert you updater and pressed the link all I got was "Server...something. Try again later." I was so **.

I liked this chapter, despite Allen behaving like an ** and Hitomi getting kidnapped.
If you plan to finish the plot in the next chapter may I suggest an epilogue, maybe something happy? Something where that healer gets a boot in his behind. I hate him and would really like to read about him getting, I don't know, Ebola?
Nah, too contagious. How about Spain flue?

I'm a sadist when it comes to characters that behave bad towards Van or Hitomi, I can't help it ^__^

I'm having a problem deciding who I hate more! Can't wait to read what happens next.

I am really enjoying this story. You are very good at describing the characters and their angst. I like the plot turns as well. To be honest, I may be in the minority, but I feel bad for Allen. He was deceived after all. As for the last chapter, people in love (especially love spurned) do crazy things. I'm sure he will come to his senses. Maybe it would be helpful to describe more of how Van's love is different from Allen's love/obsession. It may help to make me feel less sympathetic for Allen.

Oh I really hate him now! this isn't the real allen his loathing and disguset of Van he's not the better man. as for the tramp Talia I think she has something to do with Van condisition that *tich well keep it coming. Hope Allen gets his (NOW) keep it coming.

That pathetic blond wuss is getting on my nerves! How about I make a deal with you and get to kick him in his flat behind?

Keep it coming and as for allen he's an **!! I don't like him very much! Merle well shes a little pest too!