can't wait to read the revisions and see everything all nice and improved! :) Yay! Sequal!

*kills u* jk xDD yeah child birth looks painful as hell, lol i can imagine Naruto naming the baby Ramen and Sasuke naming him like Uchiha or something xD will read the revision then^^

Best thing EVER! and I want to ask taru to look at my fan fic, it's just I want an EXPERTS OPINION ON MY STORY "the HYUGA AFFAIR" so pleas carry on and pleas look at mine!

plz plz update! this is the first naruto fanfic i have ever read!and its awsum! or maybe im biased coz i love sasukeXnaruto :P

woot name the baby hikaru!! please update or watever soon!!

This was too short -.-! Not that I'm complaining! Ugh, I hate sakura sometimes! :P

wow ure a really good author ^^ that if u do mpreg ull amke it in a way so that the people who don't like will be comfortable with it *hugs u* ur so nice,

like i said b4 no mpreg but if ure gonna do it like i read on ur note then no problem ^^, lol ansem is that from KH? xDD, interesting chapter, will wait for more and hope u get better ^^

omg i love this please update soon!!

mpreg please!oh and for the person who wrote that evil message to you i will hunt them down and cut off thier balls or breasts for that ! yes let them bleed and then force them to read sasunaru fanfiction untill they see our point! muahahahahahaha!i send much love and cookies to you! oh and i baked a sasunaru pie for you! it has vampiry goodness baked into it! cheer up there are aalot of people that love your story ! i know i doo!i cant wait to see the fangirls reactions i think sasuke should be really possesive and make naruto wear an engagment ring! that would be so cute!! ohh please put sasunaru smex in soom!then sasuke can call naruto 'naru-koi'! lol well update soon please i love your story!

no it was getting good, mmeh i don't want m preg oh but u can liek divide the mpreg parts so that the ones that don't want it can't read it ... if u can do that :s

Dont listen to what those evil little monkey fucktards sent you. they have no idea of fanfiction and are very homophobic.

In better news i cant wait for the next chapter it is really good.

keep on going it's really good

no offense dude, but im in grade 8 im 13 years old and i can speak and type english WAY better than you can...

Great chapter. I can't eait to read what happens next!

ok loved it, but you didnt mark it as complete...its still marked as incomplete.