 Crusader Ari 2004-03-14 . chapter 1Really good story! You really should continue. And I think Zek should go to Zim's lab and see a transmission from the tallests. I think they should recognize her and that she's Red's sister or something cause she's got a temper just like his... |
 Katterree Fengari 2001-11-19 . chapter 1oo, good, um.. Zim figures out that Zek is an alien? or she decides to go to Zim's house finds his lab and he's in a transmission with the tallest who reconize her? |
 Teka Mitsuki 2001-11-18 . chapter 1 Why did you diss Dib like that!? Dib is awesome! |
 Ztarlight 2001-09-12 . chapter 1I think this fic is very good, it's very dark and dreary. I would like to see you continue this. You'd like suggestions? Okay, let's see...from what I see here, 1). Dib doesn't realize that Zek is an alien. 2). It looked like Zim recognized who Zek was. 3). Add Gir. He's guaranteed to make any good story even better. Trust me. :) |
 Invader Zam 2001-09-07 . chapter 1 Hello Zek. The Almighty tallest said you'd come. I am Zam. I live nextdoor to Zim. I work with Riz, a female invader. Alas, the journey is long and... windy... thingy. (My true name is Adam) I will need your email so that u can help me destroy this stink... yuck... place. See you then. |
 Rabid and the Wolf 2001-08-25 . chapter 1Great! Write more! |
 red 2001-08-25 . chapter 1 good |
 Retroactive Definition 2001-08-25 . chapter 1Cool! Continue this! Um...sorry, no ideas...it's late at night and I'm struggling to think of four more bloopers to make 20 in all...sorry. |
 Cosmic Rhapsody 2001-08-24 . chapter 1>. |
 Amethyst Soul 2001-08-24 . chapter 1Hmmm... this is a good start. Not like the clichéd new-kid-in-skool-and-automatically-befriends-zim-or-dib fics. ^.^ I look forward to the next chapter. And E.T. is really cool. ::pets it and gets arm bitten off:: o.o |