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| EMBUR101 2007-10-08 ch 2,  | abuse*quite litterally rolling on the floor laughing* OMFG! I forgot how entertaining ppl could be. The ppl in my school are the most NORMAL SONS OF ** U WILL EVER MEET! RAWR!! This is really making me want to get a new aim sn...haha, I'm Daphne...I miss scooby doo...XD |
| jinxedphoenix 2007-09-22 ch 2, | abuselmao so funny! |
| xkidrogue 2007-09-22 ch 2, | abusehahhaha! our "Blaise" would kill me if he knew i sent u this...wow i must have split personality disorder...im both hermione and pansy...talent. lol go ferret! |
| Stargazing BasketCase 2007-09-22 ch 1, | abuseYeah, okay. This is the kinda story that gets my goat, so I'm probably going to vent a bit. IM? Instant Messaging? Erm, I don't think so - these characters are magical, remember? What the hell happened to owls? Or any other magical means of communication? I'm assuming they're at home here - does the Burrow even have electricity? How's the computer going to work. You said the convo was emailed to Harry. If he's still with the Dursleys, then how the hell does he have a computer? And keep in mind the time-frame of the series - would they even HAVE computers and IM and emails then? I'd probably be new tech, and therefore very very expensive. Next point: this sentence - "Hermione: "whats your issue?" Hermione spat vehemtly" 1. "Vehemently" is spelt wrong. 2. Is Hermione typing or speaking? 3. "What's" needs an apostrophe. Last point - it's OOC. Very. Hermione swearing and calling herself a nerd? NERD IS AMERICAN. STOP IT! Hermione using chatspeak? The pair of them having a discussion about sex and masturbation? Yeah, right. Go back and re-read the books. But yeah. Personally, I don't find it particularly funny, either - there are many people on this site who have a more sophisticated sense of humour than this fanfic caters to. N.B.: this is not a flame. :D |
| Shorty-Ace 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abusethat...[laugh]...was...[laugh]...the...[laugh]...funniest...[laugh]...thing...[laugh]...i have...[laugh]... read...[laugh]...all night! so creative! So out there, so, thoughts outside the circular box! i LOVE -Ashley |
| BlindedxxFalcon 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseI love this! Its great! |
| connieewing 2007-09-20 ch 1, | abuseLMAO! That was cute LMAO!! Falls off the chair! |
| xkidrogue 2007-09-20 ch 1, | abuselol yeah...if only they knew the true inspiration of this story. don't tell them! if you do... our dear "ron" will kill me...he practically killed me for giving u this... |