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| NekoDoodle 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abusePretty good. |
| NightmareTears 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Extrememly elegant. I think you captured their personalities perfectly. Epic win. (SO gonna fave this.) |
| Kiseki no Tenshi 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant fic!! Loved to see Tobi's side of the story!! |
| Akatsuki210 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is awesome! I feel so bad for Tobi...you portrayed his dilemma and his devotion to Dei really well. |
| DreamerLoverHaterKillerMold... 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseOMG That was so good it made me cry! XD T_T |
| azab 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abusei liked it |
| XxHunter The One and OnlyxX 2007-09-27 ch 1, | abuseYea deidara told tobi to run great one shot! |
| Choja 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet! I'm not going to say I cried, because that just bugs me when people cry over fanfiction for some reason, but it was getting a little watery-eyed on this side of the keyboard. I can tell you put a lot of heart into this. Good job! |
| animelover123456 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseomg you had my cryong i am talking about balling out with tears! I loved it but it was so sad but thats what makes it so good! |
| Darkofthenight 2007-09-20 ch 1, | abuseI'm estatic that you were listening to switchfoot and Pillar. They give me inspiration too, and this story was a good one. It's so wonderfully sad. |
| Dragon Mistress of the Heav... 2007-09-20 ch 1, | abuseNo, Deidara wasn't supposed to die... I loved him so much... TT_TT This little story made me feel better though :) |