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Reviews For: Jurassic Park: The Genesis Factor - Reviews: Page 1 of 3

jtrwj
2008-05-09
ch 14, anon.
abuseDo more son.
Kiyoko Usagi
2008-03-17
ch 14,
abuseYou should have seen the smile on my face when i read Grant's name.
and how fast it went away when his TINY part came to an end.
haha
anywho, i'll wait for the next additions patiently. I'm working on about a dozen stories and a few novels. So take your time and I look forward to seeing what you've got in store.
Kiyoko Usagi
2008-03-17
ch 13,
abuse: (
I like Raptor. He is my favorite!...this saddened me.
Kiyoko Usagi
2008-03-17
ch 12,
abusewow. I'll bet Crichton didn't expect people to remember that mosquitoes bite many various amounts of animals. But at the same time, it can digest blood of one dino, go to another, then get caught in sap. But that was a very good point, which also brings Dr. Grant's little remark in JP3 to a bit of truth, The one where he says what was made on those islads were theme park monsters.
: )
wow...i just took all that way to far.
anywho
Kiyoko Usagi
2008-03-17
ch 11,
abuseHAHA!...every time I hear or read, "spot on," I think of Disney's Tarzan when Jane says, "spot on"
hahaha...ok. moving on.
Kiyoko Usagi
2008-03-17
ch 10,
abuseonce again, my guess was wrong. gosh dernit!
...
oh well.
I laughed at the ending. They petty fighting. It was cute.
hahaha
Kiyoko Usagi
2008-03-17
ch 9,
abuseoh look at that, glowing orange liquid! LETS EAT IT!
: )
sad thing is, it makes me crave gummy worms.
anywho-
my guess is that the female raptor turned into a human-lady.
: )
Kiyoko Usagi
2008-03-13
ch 8,
abuseWell shucks! I had my own theory going on that the fossil Dr. Grant is looking at was the dude that was in the mirror thing that the note was written about or rather that it didn't work and he was still "off"
until the number 400 plus the word ago came into play.
Kiyoko Usagi
2008-03-13
ch 7,
abuseHA! I cuss like a sailor! (yes I know, how unlady like) Oh well. I enjoy cussing. My teachers say it's because I lack in creativity and am literally dying on the inside. HA! Who would of thought I would become a published poet and soon to be published novelist. (...I'm finished ranting on about how much I hate private school)
p.s YAY! Dr. Grant!
Kiyoko Usagi
2008-03-13
ch 6,
abuseTo comment on your top author's note- I only recently started reading Jurassic fanfiction because I didn't think it would exist. And while searching I saw some pretty freaky summaries about ladies hooking up with the raptors. I don't mind if people have crushes on raptors...it's their lives. But I noticed the lack of intelligence in their writing styles and even the way they wrote their summaries. Despite my hyperactive reviews I'm quite smart and enjoy well written and good stories. And yours is the first one I finally came across! so YAY
: )
Kiyoko Usagi
2008-03-13
ch 5,
abuseyay Dr. Alan Grant!
: )
Kiyoko Usagi
2008-03-13
ch 4,
abuseI liked your poem. And I think I hate the last note about the test being a failure, cause I'm sure their whole conversation was more than 30 seconds. Uh oh
Kiyoko Usagi
2008-03-13
ch 3,
abusei enjoyed your input at the end. it was like one of those cheesy soap operas. : )
anywho...it saddens me that Dr Grant doesnt play a big part, but I like Raptor.
(now to respond to your responce to me!)
notes? ...why notes?
hahaha
forestspirit101
2008-03-13
ch 14,
abuseThis is one of the best JP fanfics ever! Don't stop now! Please keep going!
Kiyoko Usagi
2008-03-12
ch 2,
abuseno alan grant : (
haha but i do like the storyline forming. and how mikah is like "i cant understand you!" i dont know why, but its funny to me.
anywho...
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