Dont continue it! Ipm a yaoi lover and I simply LOVE it!

*:D

a pairing I didn't expect but a funnier than I expected I enjoyed this story

loved your fic! loved the pairing! colud you please write more of it?

OMG LIEK HOW CUD U BRAKE UP GLENN ADN CYRUS!1! TEY R LUVAS 4EVA, EVN BEYOND TEH GRAYVE, ADN DONT U 4GET IT BITHC!1 :0!angst!1!

...I think I just killed a thousand brain cells, typing that. Seriously, though? Kudos to you for writing an interesting fanfic, even though I am (admittedly) a Crono/Marle fangirl. Apparently a Glenn/Cyrus one as well. O.o (personally, I've always thought there was this...chemistry between Glenn and Magus. m, Magus.)

Oh, that was nice. *Very* nice, if you compare it to other CT fics in ff.net. *shudder* The dialogue was believable, and even though the fic lacked a true focus and a point, I can always appreciate it when the characters remain themselves throughout the story. Your Crono especially was a very nice read; straight out of the game, it seemed. Good work on the characterization.

Your grammar is also way better than most of the ff.net's CT ficcers' (but that's really not saying much, is it?).

The only thing that really irked me when I read was the use of fangirl Japanese. For what reason did you add that "sou" into the fic? Just one very random word of Japanese, a language neither Crono or Glenn speaks, is distracting and breaks the flow of the narrative. Especially followed right afterwards by Glenn's "aye", it made me cringe. Write the fic in *one language*. It makes you look a whole lot more competent.

(Now this just yells, "I've been to Japan and KNOW the language, lookie me!", but I can't resist. "Sou" was incorrectly used. When Crono made Glenn promise that whatever they'd discuss, it wouldn't leave the room, Glenn should've replied with something like "Un" or "Wakatta" or "II yo". NOT "sou".)

When it all comes together, though, you have definite promise. I hope you'll work on your plots, drop the fangirl Japanese and go on to write many happy gay stories. :) *offers cookie* Thanks for the entertainment.

ACK I have the Hamutaro theme stuck in my head and I dont even watch that show! ; good fic I really like it but it ended to soon! .

lol.. best chrono trigger fic I've read so far. I love how you portrayed Glenn P (I always knew he had a crush on Cyrus mouahahahah) And I love how you portrayed Chrono as well. Eheh.. cool ending *giggle*

It's not often you come across Chrono Trigger yaoi, and certainly not with this pairing, but I liked it a lot! One of the best games I've played, so it was nice to read a well-written fic of it._

*lol* That... was great. _ "He was all dolled up in glenn-ness." Heehee! I really liked this, actually... I love Glenn/Crono, and there is virtually NONE of it, so... I like. I like a lot. And it's well-written, too! Bonusu! Write more stuuuff!

_ this was nice . i loooooove anything involving Glenn-sama _;;

never thought about Chrono/Glenn, though that sounds kinda better than Magus/Glenn _ which is also cool, if unlikely

Ghost

You have a pet demon? Cool. Where do you get them besides Hell?

I have to be quiet now, because everyone in the house is asleep. Because of this, I think I busted something important in my head when I stifled a laugh at the last line. [clapclapclapclap]

Hehe, the story was very cute, nice use of olde english. The plot was good and your style of writing is at a good level. The ending was a bit dissapointing though, where is my closure? -_-

*swoonie swoonie* Gosh, that's great. _ You have gave me the daily Giddy Grin of Yaoiness (TM!)! Thanks bunches!

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! UHIHIHIHIHIHIHIHIHI! GEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEH! KYAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! *goes on like this for hours and hours and hours and...* (Yes, this is a useless review, Pardy! XD)