good story so keep writing.

Wow..
who knew Ron had it?
:))

Great story!

love it
I think this is the best story i have ever read about shego and ron

hm, well, that was good. inboring languae, that is. can't say how great it was without falling aslee...z

more! i require MORE!!
great job man, but where are all these rongo fics you are talking about? ive only seen one from blackbird...

it was great i loved it

enjoyed the fic, well written... and I am a fan on Rongo fics...

TTFN

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

Great stuff. Y'kow, I think Deadpool and Shego have alot in common. Of course, Deadpool's badder than both she and Drakken combined. Note that I said badder, not better, though he probably is. This oneshot made me thing of that for some reason.

Very well written. I not as much of a fan of erotic writing (which this is in my opinion) as I am a fan of a romantic pairing though. In either case you kept the characters in character rather well. It is refreshing seeing some of the cliched aspects fanfiction writers have given them broken. I especially liked that Shego was the good listener and Ron was the one with the problem in this story. Ron being the understanding listener is by far the most used cliche broken here (and one I'm guilty of as a Rongo writer), followed closely by the size of his penis. By the way shame on Ron for trying to duck out of pleasuring Shego after she took care of him; I thought better of him than that!

Aedan

Great story I loved it please keep up the great work

i think you tried to fit to much into one chapter and one scene but overall it was good. I hope to see more from you in the future. Love rongo.

Here's a guy you never expected to review beeftony...

The one, The only M.I.!

Can I say Shego did her thang and did it well? (Catch my joke?)

This has got to be the most direct in character Rongo fic I have ever read... Shego is so... Shego. You did an excellent job with the flow of things too... And the rated M thing may be a turn off for some readers, but I keep a fair and open mind... Congrats on a great write!

Mike Industries

Awesome story, I didn't notice a single oocness, please continue maybe if you don't mind a 3-some between Ron, Shego, and Adrena Lynn.