Oh wow, I really loved the parts in italics! :O Very haunting!
And for the overall fic: :3 Very nice! Cute without too fluffy. Well done!

OH! That was unique! I liked it. :D

i consider your writing.. 'perfect.'
it's seriously flawless.

currently reading your fic, 'Beautiful.'
loving that also(:

"I only did it to prove you wrong."

Agh, what a Kaiba line! :D I could imagine his voice perfectly as he said it. Great story. I loved it immensely.

W00T. It was fun for me as well! :D

Wow. I only came across this because I got a notification via email that this fic had been added to YuGiOh Shounen Ai, and I am so glad that I checked out the link.

This is short, but fantastic. You characterised them both perfectly, the setting was both realistic, and an original way to get them talking and onto some form of friendship. I just loved the bit outside, with Jou just turning to Kaiba and being all 'kiss me'. It's just such a Jou thing, and really swung the piece around :D

In short, I loved this. I'm gonna add you to my alerts for sure now, and then check out your other work. I have read Beautiful, thinking about it, I was linked to it via the KaiJou comn on Livejournal. You're a very talented author, I look forward to reading more of your works :D

I LIKE IT! ESPECIALLY THE VAMPIRE BITS AHAH XD! But it's god [glomps] I AM YOUR FANGIRL [pom poms wave]

Aw, darn. Reading this had made me late for first period. However, I don't find myself caring because I loved this so much!
*applauds* You used Bonkotsu several times! I was so extatic!
This was the sweetest thing ever. I love the concept of Kaiba being a vampire, be it in a performance or not. That's so sweet, though... Jounouchi and Kaiba in a school play! ^__^ I like that idea!!
Favorite two lines in the whole thing were:
“AH!”

“What the hell, bonkotsu!?”
Ingenious! I laughed to hard!
Parking lot kisses are the best, ne?
-good job!!-
-iloveatem

Cute story. I really like your style.