Nice! Very well written! There were quite a few lines that grabbed my attention:

How bout we take it outside,” his voice was a low growl, more of an instruction than a suggestion and Sam loved that his brother was making demands on a demon, showing no fear. That was awesome.
(the "That was awesome." part was a nice touch! Pure 20-something guy-speak!) :)


As Sam gently unwrapped his brother’s arms (NICE IMAGERY!)
Dean said wearily, “We need to find a non-stinging formula because that ** really smarts.”

A faint smile crossed the younger man's face because finding a non-stinging antiseptic really was at the bottom of their to-do list. (Nice touch to add a little subtle humor here.)

Although he couldn't imagine how Dean could be thinking about dinner after the disaster that was lunch.
(I thought this was a GREAT way to end this!!)

Thanks for posting this! I'm off to read one of your multi-chapter stories now!

Love the Dean whumping -- geez the guy can't get a break. The scary part was Sam and the demon "bonding". At least on the demon's part.

October - hurry up!!
Thanks for the great oneshot

great job on the story...and great idea. it makes sense that meg could have gotten out of hell when the gates opened, and would be looking for some revenge. good idea...and very well written!