Excellent writing and strong dialogue. You didn't gloss over the darkness in Anakin and Luke's past and you weren't afraid to allow tension between the two. That said, this piece is also very poignant. The relationship between a father and son who both experienced loss was very well done!

Ldihawk

A nicely written story :) Just one thing - Luke did love Mara with all his heart. I understand that you could've chosen to take your story in this direction, which is fine. Just wanted to point that out though, since I am an avid L/M fan. )

Otherwise, it was very well done. Nice job!

Dana

I like this story, but I was kinda confused about it. I don't know...maybe it's just me...I thought Luke did love Mara? I don't know, it's one of those things where everything makes sense, but when put together, it doesn't. It's probably just a "me" thing.

S.S.A.

apparrently you need some understanding. read a star wars novel before you write a story. luke loved mara passionately.

Absolutely beautiful. Well written and insightfully touching.

Well done. :)