I liked how the story turned out. Very realistic.

First off, yes I took forever to review these. You may or may not know that I'm having the Week of Crazy and you chose an inconvenient time to be productive. How dare you, right? So yeah, sorry about that!

But more importantly, awesome job with the tension. You know I love the vignette and your strange and mysterious ways with it. This is like a shot of Jaeger or something-- packed with everything you need in one tiny glass!!

God that was a horrible analogy. You get my point though, no?

A very nice little piece. I've never thought of this coupling before but why not? They're both favorites of mine and you handled them both very well.

thank you for writing this. i thought i was the only one who saw that.