AW Daniel is SO adorable!! I love him! Love this fic

"The pain of loosing Sha're was still there . . ."

The correct word is losing.

Lose = lost something

Loose = something doesn't fit

Aw...adorable!

I'm pretty sure you already know how much I love this, but I figured it bore repeating: I love this :D

nice to see that followed up...and nicely done.